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You can't live in my mind
for even one more day.
Your magical friendship is killing me
cause one minute you're there
and the next you don't even care.
My heart so far from being broke
more like a knot never meant to loosen.
Seems this rope I'm clinging to
isn't even tied to you.
I think you enjoy this tug-of-war
because I'm hurting more and more.
So I'll reject you till I cry,
turn every word into a lie.
My past has left no vacancy
for the tricks you want to play.
It tints all of the real things
you might happen to say.
All mixed up with memories
of trusting with all my heart
you might love me right now
but I know soon we'll be apart.
So maybe you could help me out
and let me go today.
Untie the noose around my neck
I'm begging you, don't stay.
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Don't Stay

Contributed by kori31 on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Don't stay.
You can't live in my mind
for even one more day.
Your magical friendship is killing me
cause one minute you're there
and the next you don't even care.
My heart so far from being broke
more like a knot never meant to loosen.
Seems this rope I'm clinging to
isn't even tied to you.
I think you enjoy this tug-of-war
because I'm hurting more and more.
So I'll reject you till I cry,
turn every word into a lie.
My past has left no vacancy
for the tricks you want to play.
It tints all of the real things
you might happen to say.
All mixed up with memories
of trusting with all my heart
you might love me right now
but I know soon we'll be apart.
So maybe you could help me out
and let me go today.
Untie the noose around my neck
I'm begging you, don't stay.

Copyright © kori31 ... [ 2003-08-12 18:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Don't Stay (User Rating: 1 )
by stargazer on Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 05:33:16 PM AEST
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Aww, I read this poem and a tear actually escaped. I know how hard it is to let someone go especially when you still obviously have feelings for them. I had to let go of my best friend... the one person I wanted but I had cried long enough.

This poem was amazing... //amy//

Re: Don't Stay (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 09:28:57 AM AEST
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oh...this poem is so incredible...it's exactly, exactly what goes through my head...i want to write it out on black paper and draw fallen angels around it, and put it on my wall...

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