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Array ( [sid] => 21857 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => sense it [time] => 2003-08-13 13:35:00 [hometext] => sickeninly sweet- like cotton candy dipped in sugar- ew yuck [bodytext] => * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
i wanna kiss you with all the love that i have for you-
all at once-
so you can feel just how much that is-
*
i want you to taste every tear-
that falls from my eyes when your not here-
so you can taste just how much i miss you-
*
i want you to watch me dance-
the way i dance when, what i want to be doing-
is making love to you-
so you can see just how much i desire you
*
i want to light candles and insence-
lay you down on a bed of rose petals-
and rub slick, sweet scented oil all over your beautiful body-
and when you breath in the scents of
vanilla
and roses
insence
and lavandar
you'll know just how much i care for you
*
i want you to pull me on top of you
tickle me so i yelp and scream-
so we roll around like little children-
giggling and laughing and playfighting
till you pin me under you-
hear my breath change-
from quick, playful growls and meows-
to quiet, sweet, happy submission-
you'll push yourself into me-
joining our bodies at last-
and if you listen,
to the way my breath reacts to your movement
to the way your moaning reaches a peak-
to the way we whisper i love you,
like it's the last time we'll ever get to say it-
you can hear-
just how much we are meant for each other-
you'll sense it... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 2 [informant] => fayeelizibeth [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
sense it

Contributed by fayeelizibeth on Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
i wanna kiss you with all the love that i have for you-
all at once-
so you can feel just how much that is-
*
i want you to taste every tear-
that falls from my eyes when your not here-
so you can taste just how much i miss you-
*
i want you to watch me dance-
the way i dance when, what i want to be doing-
is making love to you-
so you can see just how much i desire you
*
i want to light candles and insence-
lay you down on a bed of rose petals-
and rub slick, sweet scented oil all over your beautiful body-
and when you breath in the scents of
vanilla
and roses
insence
and lavandar
you'll know just how much i care for you
*
i want you to pull me on top of you
tickle me so i yelp and scream-
so we roll around like little children-
giggling and laughing and playfighting
till you pin me under you-
hear my breath change-
from quick, playful growls and meows-
to quiet, sweet, happy submission-
you'll push yourself into me-
joining our bodies at last-
and if you listen,
to the way my breath reacts to your movement
to the way your moaning reaches a peak-
to the way we whisper i love you,
like it's the last time we'll ever get to say it-
you can hear-
just how much we are meant for each other-
you'll sense it...




Copyright © fayeelizibeth ... [ 2003-08-13 13:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: sense it (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 09:07:14 PM AEST
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Neat write...Hope he got the message ;)




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