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Array ( [sid] => 21892 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Should I? [time] => 2003-08-14 10:05:00 [hometext] => Having a problem & just venting it out!
[bodytext] => Things are crazy,
My heads spinning fast,
my thinking is hazy,
will this ever past?
What will I do,
What will I say,
wondering all the whys & whos,
in my so crazy days,
I need a break,
to clear my thoughts,
choices I need to make,
on the problems that I've got,
I need to talk to someone,
to help in what I feel,
being an Adult is never fun,
lifes such a big deal,
hoping this will all die out,
and my thinking will be clear,
I just want to scream & shout,
or maybe shead a tear,
Should I be happy or sad,
should I even care,
maybe even mad,
Is life really fare?

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 21 [informant] => LOWMAN613 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Should I?

Contributed by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Things are crazy,
My heads spinning fast,
my thinking is hazy,
will this ever past?
What will I do,
What will I say,
wondering all the whys & whos,
in my so crazy days,
I need a break,
to clear my thoughts,
choices I need to make,
on the problems that I've got,
I need to talk to someone,
to help in what I feel,
being an Adult is never fun,
lifes such a big deal,
hoping this will all die out,
and my thinking will be clear,
I just want to scream & shout,
or maybe shead a tear,
Should I be happy or sad,
should I even care,
maybe even mad,
Is life really fare?

Copyright © LOWMAN613 ... [ 2003-08-14 10:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Should I? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 10:21:31 AM AEST
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Awwwww.........good venting! Life is never fair,but having friends who care makes a difference. I have realized confusion is just the normal gamut of life. If you need a friend,
I'm always available. 0:-) always...joni

Re: Should I? (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 10:32:06 AM AEST
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very good venting...you know my number

Shari

Re: Should I? (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 10:16:38 PM AEST
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some how it all seems to work out, just in time for a little more. good write

Re: Should I? (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 11:35:17 PM AEST
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Ahhhhh Christina Im wondering if there is something blowing in the air. Im sorry that your having these troubles. If you need to let more out pm me email me whatever it takes I am here!! I have been feeling like my head is going to twist completry around and around on my shoulders with all of my hair standing straight in the air. No this life of ours just isn't fair and sometimes its very hard to swallow. I keep telling myself we cant know the sweet without tasting the bitter so we need to keep on trying. Your a good friend to me Christina and Im here for you anytime.HUGS
michelle

Re: Should I? (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 03:08:55 AM AEST
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Good venting..time will heal many things..venkat

Re: Should I? (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 03:38:49 AM AEST
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Great poem ... I can relate so well... Jan

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