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Array ( [sid] => 21953 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Through With You [time] => 2003-08-16 03:05:00 [hometext] => Its about falling in love with a guy and him leaving and then being done with him [bodytext] => I sit and stare at the sky
My spirits raised real high

All because you loved me
And showed me who i can be

You were there with me through good times and bad
You were the best friend i'd ever had

But suddenly my life was torn apart
you were gone and i was left to mend my broken heart

Why did you leave me with such pain
All by myself i'm going insane

I loved you with all my soul
But you ripped it out and its no longer whole

Now i'm older and much stronger
You can't fool me any longer

I've changed into a person who's real tough
All because i'd had enough

Now its your turn to pay
This time its me who's gonna ruin your day

So i hope you have a life filled with hurt and pain
Maybe you too will go insane

Its over, Its done
But my life has barely begun

You can't stop me with anything you do
Because i'm through with you [comments] => 1 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 22 [informant] => NikkiMNelson [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Through With You

Contributed by NikkiMNelson on Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I sit and stare at the sky
My spirits raised real high

All because you loved me
And showed me who i can be

You were there with me through good times and bad
You were the best friend i'd ever had

But suddenly my life was torn apart
you were gone and i was left to mend my broken heart

Why did you leave me with such pain
All by myself i'm going insane

I loved you with all my soul
But you ripped it out and its no longer whole

Now i'm older and much stronger
You can't fool me any longer

I've changed into a person who's real tough
All because i'd had enough

Now its your turn to pay
This time its me who's gonna ruin your day

So i hope you have a life filled with hurt and pain
Maybe you too will go insane

Its over, Its done
But my life has barely begun

You can't stop me with anything you do
Because i'm through with you

Copyright © NikkiMNelson ... [ 2003-08-16 03:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Through With You (User Rating: 1 )
by PoloRM on Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 02:23:28 AM AEST
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Last time I commented on your write
Said everything seemed true and right
And hoped you both will always be together
And that your love should shine forever

lol!! I hope this wasn't meant for the same man!!! Good write! Rhymes beautifully and the structure makes it flow =)

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