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Array ( [sid] => 21986 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Recessive Path [time] => 2003-08-17 00:25:00 [hometext] => Ease the pain......calm the storms......cry out loud from where you sit...... [bodytext] => Hiding in the sorrow
of yet another day.
Frosted glass of morning
reminds you of your stay.
Reach on through snags of
razored memories,
rest here for a bit.
Ease the pain, calm the storms,
cry out loud from where you sit.
Please rush not home
to find suspension here,
lost amid the mid-day darkness.
If all were known of the struggle
so desperate,
caution would replace recklessness.
The pressure immense,
the storm elite,
it's waiting just over the ridge.
Lost is the path from the narrow road
caught opposite a burning bridge.
Have no fear of silent footsteps
battling for the shore.
Climb inside the hidden circle
and rest forever more.
Find shelter in the forest,
pledge a journey slow in pace.
raise your shield to hide yourself,
nothing left of you to trace. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 13 [informant] => jaeann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Recessive Path

Contributed by jaeann on Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 12:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Hiding in the sorrow
of yet another day.
Frosted glass of morning
reminds you of your stay.
Reach on through snags of
razored memories,
rest here for a bit.
Ease the pain, calm the storms,
cry out loud from where you sit.
Please rush not home
to find suspension here,
lost amid the mid-day darkness.
If all were known of the struggle
so desperate,
caution would replace recklessness.
The pressure immense,
the storm elite,
it's waiting just over the ridge.
Lost is the path from the narrow road
caught opposite a burning bridge.
Have no fear of silent footsteps
battling for the shore.
Climb inside the hidden circle
and rest forever more.
Find shelter in the forest,
pledge a journey slow in pace.
raise your shield to hide yourself,
nothing left of you to trace.

Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2003-08-17 00:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Recessive Path (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 05:02:51 PM AEST
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holy jake! you are so tremendous, you just drag me right in to this pieces. I have to read more than once to make sure I don`t miss a thing. I won`t tell you , you can write. you know that. I will tell you how exciting it is for me to read your work. Crow

Re: Recessive Path (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 06:57:24 PM AEST
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you! my friend....excite my mind....thank you for your kind words....coming from a fellow writer...one who's work i admire tremendously....means so much to me....sometimes i know i can write....sometimes i don't know....as always it's awesome to hear....

Re: Recessive Path (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 04:42:04 AM AEST
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Very intense and breath taking..venkat

Re: Recessive Path (User Rating: 1 )
by ravenfire on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 12:37:59 PM AEST
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every poem of yours i have read so far i have felt the need to comment on. they just pull me in and play with my emotions.
beautiful stuff.

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