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[title] => As I crumble........................
[time] => 2003-08-19 08:05:00
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[bodytext] => Solitude fills my world. I try to keep focus on life. On a peaceful state of mind. But stress comes in waves of storms. Storm's that are sure to hit you with lightning. Lightning attracted to nothing but your skull..Lightning that rumbles in the clouds growing ever so strong, not releasing it's force, as it stays on course, searching for, the likes of your, soft compassionate self. I dont deserve these stroms of pain. Delivered in my name. Agony as I lay, upon the ground. Skull split in two charred hemispheres. Im still alive. I see the clouds above begin to break, and clear. Nothing left to hear. But the movements of my newly charred cortex. Crusty chunks of skull fall to the ground. What a retched sound. I look towards the clearing sky, as I crumble to my demise... And I see deep brown eyes.. That have appeared from thin air.... Short brown hair, a permeating scent of sweetness fills the atmosphere. SHe gazes into my right eye, The only part of my head that survived, the precise lighting strikes. You see, Lucifer brought the clouds. And GOD saved my eye...Just so I can peer at your beautiful face, one last time. As I crumble, there I lye. Wishing I had another try. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Chard [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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