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Array ( [sid] => 2214 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => First and Last [time] => 2002-08-13 06:29:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The first glance,
sparks fly.

The first smile,
attraction grows.

The first date,
a connection is formed.

The first hug,
deepens the bond.

The first kiss,
seals the deal.

The first "I love you,"
promises forever.

Sometimes forever,
isn't for always.

The last "I love you,"
brings uncetanty about the future.

The last kiss,
sparks doubt in the decision.

The last hug,
brings no comfort.

The last date,
severs the ties.

The last smile,
says forever is gone.

The last glance,
is blurred by tears. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Angel12881 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

First and Last

Contributed by Angel12881 on Tuesday, 13th August 2002 @ 06:29:10 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

The first glance,
sparks fly.

The first smile,
attraction grows.

The first date,
a connection is formed.

The first hug,
deepens the bond.

The first kiss,
seals the deal.

The first "I love you,"
promises forever.

Sometimes forever,
isn't for always.

The last "I love you,"
brings uncetanty about the future.

The last kiss,
sparks doubt in the decision.

The last hug,
brings no comfort.

The last date,
severs the ties.

The last smile,
says forever is gone.

The last glance,
is blurred by tears.

Copyright © Angel12881 ... [ 2002-08-13 06:29:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: First and Last (User Rating: 1 )
by Written2bRead on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 10:00:20 AM AEST
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I know that you wrote this hella days (and a half) ago, but I just came across it. I really love the way you write, I don't know many others that can do the stuff you do.
The way this is written is pretty smart, the way each step leads up to the promise of "forever"... and then forever fades away. (silence) the last glance, is blurred by tears. Why does it have to be that way?
I like the feelings ect you accompanied with each step too. It's so TRUE each time, and that's what I think poetry should be... the way you think about the ideal steps of a relationship is almost perfect.
If you see this comment, why don't you e-mail me or something, latesauce
(stikker4life@yahoo.com)

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