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Array ( [sid] => 22155 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => GOD LET ME STAY [time] => 2003-08-21 00:35:00 [hometext] => some people want to stay when they die my cuz wanted to stay she was only 19 and she was getting married and she had a great life ahead of her. [bodytext] => When is my time up when must I god please let me stay god I cant leave them alone it is not right please let me have second chance at life you did with othersand why I cant. I dont have to go do I ? Why now i cant go it is to soon I have not lived yet I am only starting mommy I cant go. I am sliping he pulling me back god let go i dont want to go i still have a life it is not time to go is it?please let me stay! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 39 [informant] => justen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
GOD LET ME STAY

Contributed by justen on Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 12:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief



When is my time up when must I god please let me stay god I cant leave them alone it is not right please let me have second chance at life you did with othersand why I cant. I dont have to go do I ? Why now i cant go it is to soon I have not lived yet I am only starting mommy I cant go. I am sliping he pulling me back god let go i dont want to go i still have a life it is not time to go is it?please let me stay!




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Re: GOD LET ME STAY (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 04:35:17 AM AEST
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This is a very touching write... however, it needs a bit of work...
My thoughts are with you, Justen.
Hugs
Jenni


Re: GOD LET ME STAY (User Rating: 1 )
by GODSBESTIMAGE on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 02:09:57 PM AEST
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GOD BLESS,

GOD HAS HIS REASONS WHY HE DOES THE THINGS HE DO. NOW SHE'S A ANGEL WATCHING OVER YOU.




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