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Array ( [sid] => 22286 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sorry...You're Too Late! [time] => 2003-08-24 08:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => When i'm gone
will you even care
or will you even realize
that i'm not even there?
When i'm gone
you will regret everything you said
and i hope you live in pain
once you hear that i am dead.
Pull the rope tight
let go and let me swing
and notice that to you
my life didn't mean a thing.
So there i hang
with no movement left to bare
will you notice something
when tomorrow i'm not there?
So, you got what you wanted
you chose my own fate
Oh, so now you want to help me...
well, i'm sorry, you're TOO LATE!
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Sorry...You're Too Late!

Contributed by pretty_n_pink on Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

When i'm gone
will you even care
or will you even realize
that i'm not even there?
When i'm gone
you will regret everything you said
and i hope you live in pain
once you hear that i am dead.
Pull the rope tight
let go and let me swing
and notice that to you
my life didn't mean a thing.
So there i hang
with no movement left to bare
will you notice something
when tomorrow i'm not there?
So, you got what you wanted
you chose my own fate
Oh, so now you want to help me...
well, i'm sorry, you're TOO LATE!

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Re: Sorry...You're Too Late! (User Rating: 1 )
by PsychoticDreamz on Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 02:27:43 PM AEST
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WoW, I really like the flow of this, and especially the lines 'Pull the rope tight let go and let me swing and notice that to you my life didn't mean a thing.' Great write!

*_-Psych-_*

Re: Sorry...You're Too Late! (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 02:28:48 AM AEST
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Excellently written poem, awesome flowing words that cut to the soul.
I know the pain you bare, I've been there so many times its freaky, its amazing how many people out there just dont seem to care about anyone else other than themselves.
You hold in there, dont let anyone get you down.
Will look forward to more of you work.

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