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Array ( [sid] => 22484 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Bleeding my emotions [time] => 2003-08-29 23:05:00 [hometext] => I'm so scared... [bodytext] => Lay down my heart
Breathe into it flames of distrust
Cut open my heart
Pour from it all the love I never obtained
Burn my heart
Smoke out every ray of hope
Cloud my heart
With self-hatred’s inflictions
Scratch into my hear
Bleed out my emotions
Tear my heart in two
See within, the emptiness inside
Sew up my heart with loose thread
And stamp upon it – it’s only my heart [comments] => 5 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 48 [informant] => afraid_of_fear [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Bleeding my emotions

Contributed by afraid_of_fear on Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Lay down my heart
Breathe into it flames of distrust
Cut open my heart
Pour from it all the love I never obtained
Burn my heart
Smoke out every ray of hope
Cloud my heart
With self-hatred’s inflictions
Scratch into my hear
Bleed out my emotions
Tear my heart in two
See within, the emptiness inside
Sew up my heart with loose thread
And stamp upon it – it’s only my heart



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Re: Bleeding my emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 11:54:45 PM AEST
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Ouch!!!
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Bleeding my emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 01:21:31 AM AEST
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oh charlotte, such a sad write but it reflects your emotions so well, pm me if u wanna talk, i'm here for ya charlotte, much love
Lisa


Re: Bleeding my emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 01:46:34 AM AEST
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imagery is amazing....the pain so evident....it has strength though.....great write!!!!


Re: Bleeding my emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 02:44:26 PM AEST
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mmm good very good. I liked this a lot the last line is a little awkward but other than that its great.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Bleeding my emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 11:08:30 AM AEST
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Now my heart is bleeding for you. I will not stamp out such a beautiful heart!!! I see it,and my hopes are that oneday you see it also!!! {{{{{charlotte}}}}}}
Angel always...godspeed...joni




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