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Array ( [sid] => 22664 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Mad at a whore [time] => 2003-09-03 02:05:00 [hometext] => I don't like cheating women its just not right [bodytext] => Feel the blade
Cut the skin
You betrayed
This man again
You were wrong
I was right
Say so long
Say goodnight

Look confused
Don't admit
I'm not amused
Your throat I slit
Gasp for air
Caugh and choke
I don't care
I sit and smoke

Watch you bleed
Suffer in pain
This sight I need
Memories remain
Don't cheat the man
Like she was
Don't know the plan
Of what he does [comments] => 4 [counter] => 318 [topic] => 6 [informant] => SuicidalSon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Mad at a whore

Contributed by SuicidalSon on Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Feel the blade
Cut the skin
You betrayed
This man again
You were wrong
I was right
Say so long
Say goodnight

Look confused
Don't admit
I'm not amused
Your throat I slit
Gasp for air
Caugh and choke
I don't care
I sit and smoke

Watch you bleed
Suffer in pain
This sight I need
Memories remain
Don't cheat the man
Like she was
Don't know the plan
Of what he does




Copyright © SuicidalSon ... [ 2003-09-03 02:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Mad at a whore (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 03:25:10 AM AEST
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very dark....i'm sorry you were dealt the ultimate betrayal..........rise stronger........


Re: Mad at a whore (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 12:03:02 PM AEST
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this is dark and angry - good - get it out of your system and move on. Life is full of crap - look for the good and you will find it.

merry



Re: Mad at a whore (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 07:10:23 PM AEST
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I like and totally agree with yer comment bro, but I don't get how it relates to your poem don't get me wrong I loved the poem it was dark and bitter and I loved the rhyme scheme. I am sorry to hear that your leaving you'll definitely be missed.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Mad at a whore (User Rating: 1 )
by Sheveg on Monday, 28th June 2010 @ 01:44:07 PM AEST
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I don't like cheating men or women. You sure are mad. I hope things are better now.
Sherry




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