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Does anyone really care?
All the constant spattering
it's really not so fair.

I've tired of the waiting game
a play of hit or miss
some days are all the same
then WHAMMY! I'm really p***ed.

The faith I have is fading fast
the light now ebbs to dark
weary of the broken past
fate has left it's evil mark.

The tears fall quickly now
as reality hits it's cue
all that fear doth endows
nine lives minus a few.

The traps are cut in marbled stone
the key lost in oceans of pain
the aura seems to be on loan
I'm always left standing in the rain.

Does it really matter?
Does anyone really care?
Did you hear the clatter?
My sanity fell down the stairs [comments] => 4 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 13 [informant] => jaeann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Futility's Ire

Contributed by jaeann on Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Does it really matter?
Does anyone really care?
All the constant spattering
it's really not so fair.

I've tired of the waiting game
a play of hit or miss
some days are all the same
then WHAMMY! I'm really p***ed.

The faith I have is fading fast
the light now ebbs to dark
weary of the broken past
fate has left it's evil mark.

The tears fall quickly now
as reality hits it's cue
all that fear doth endows
nine lives minus a few.

The traps are cut in marbled stone
the key lost in oceans of pain
the aura seems to be on loan
I'm always left standing in the rain.

Does it really matter?
Does anyone really care?
Did you hear the clatter?
My sanity fell down the stairs

Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2003-09-05 10:05:00]
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Re: Futility's Ire (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 10:14:37 AM AEST
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again a vivid and moving account of inner turmoil...some do care trust in that
Shari

Re: Futility's Ire (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 02:55:58 PM AEST
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Hmm this was good although I think it could have done without the second stanza. I liked the imagery you put in this poem. Great write.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Futility's Ire (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 08:54:18 PM AEST
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Jaeann,you are such a beautiful poet.You ask the questions needing to be ask, and you pose them in poems that are simply masterpieces. Your are a truly great poet.

Re: Futility's Ire (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 12:56:02 AM AEST
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you express this very well, Crow

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