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Array ( [sid] => 22909 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => *~A Whole Lifetime to Seek~* [time] => 2003-09-08 05:05:00 [hometext] => I wrote this about a guy that I feel too fast for...and he pretty much didn't see anything in me like i saw in him....it lasted a week...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [bodytext] => I’m telling myself to hang on tight,
Trying to fight my tears with all my heart’s might,
I feel like I lost part of my mind,
Kinda like a sad love song that ran out of time,
I don't know what to feel...
how to think...
or what to see...

I might feel as if he hurt me bad,
That feeling makes my whole body very sad,
I might think he completely changed his mind,
That thought makes me feel useless and left behind,
I might see a man too good to be true,
That sight makes me numb in the face...almost blue,

A thought just occurred,
Like a cup of coffee finally done being stirred,
All hot but fresh,
Nothing more, not yet less,
It’s just a thought but also a motivation,
My night was magically filled with sensation,
Stirred with all my yearned feelings,
I finally mixed them all together and found all the meanings,

It’s solid pure memories now,
I have to face the sad long song’s sudden stop...but how?
Nothing less, not yet more,
I guess I’ll just live for tomorrow and expect my heart to soar,
I never knew I could be that weak,
But now I know...I have a whole lifetime to seek...
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*~A Whole Lifetime to Seek~*

Contributed by DancinNayNay on Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



I’m telling myself to hang on tight,
Trying to fight my tears with all my heart’s might,
I feel like I lost part of my mind,
Kinda like a sad love song that ran out of time,
I don't know what to feel...
how to think...
or what to see...

I might feel as if he hurt me bad,
That feeling makes my whole body very sad,
I might think he completely changed his mind,
That thought makes me feel useless and left behind,
I might see a man too good to be true,
That sight makes me numb in the face...almost blue,

A thought just occurred,
Like a cup of coffee finally done being stirred,
All hot but fresh,
Nothing more, not yet less,
It’s just a thought but also a motivation,
My night was magically filled with sensation,
Stirred with all my yearned feelings,
I finally mixed them all together and found all the meanings,

It’s solid pure memories now,
I have to face the sad long song’s sudden stop...but how?
Nothing less, not yet more,
I guess I’ll just live for tomorrow and expect my heart to soar,
I never knew I could be that weak,
But now I know...I have a whole lifetime to seek...




Copyright © DancinNayNay ... [ 2003-09-08 05:05:00]
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