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Array ( [sid] => 2305 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please Try! [time] => 2002-08-15 06:59:41 [hometext] => Sorry I couldn't think of a comment for the last one! This I wrote a short time after the beginning of silence! It didn't help then but just sharing it now seems to lift my thoughts! [bodytext] => Oh my god
What have I done
I wished so much
For you to be the one

Yes YOU young lady
With the silky hair
Wherever you are
I long to be there

Without even trying
You’re everything to me
All the love and happiness
You shared for free

Tweetie my dear
I love you so much
Just you yourself
And the way that you touch

Feeling sorry for myself
I acted so bad
Without you near me
I completely went mad

When in contact with people
Being back at work
It made me realise
I’ve been such a jerk! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Unaekseveer1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Please Try!

Contributed by Unaekseveer1 on Thursday, 15th August 2002 @ 06:59:41 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Oh my god
What have I done
I wished so much
For you to be the one

Yes YOU young lady
With the silky hair
Wherever you are
I long to be there

Without even trying
You’re everything to me
All the love and happiness
You shared for free

Tweetie my dear
I love you so much
Just you yourself
And the way that you touch

Feeling sorry for myself
I acted so bad
Without you near me
I completely went mad

When in contact with people
Being back at work
It made me realise
I’ve been such a jerk!

Copyright Â© Unaekseveer1 ... [ 2002-08-15 06:59:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Please Try! (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 09:26:18 AM AEST
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Dean, this is very good. I once felt this way after loosing someone I loved very much.
ShadowsCloud

Re: Please Try! (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 10:13:36 AM AEST
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You just keep going over and over in your head every single conversation you ever had Candice,
Trying to see if I could've said something different or had a different look on my face or just anything to have stopped it all going wrong!
But I just had to realise that it was simply too late, she'd gone forever!:-(

With love
Dean:-)

Re: Please Try! (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 10:22:23 AM AEST
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I know exactly what you mean, Dean. I have been there, a few times.
ShadowsCloud

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