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Array ( [sid] => 23159 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A Tear Falls [time] => 2003-09-13 08:05:00 [hometext] => This poem just came to me suddenly, I'm not really sure how I feel about it.....please send any opinions to me, thanks! [bodytext] => A tear falls
Her love calls out
The memories, this house
Stained with him
Her heart torn
Their love is no more

How can he be gone?
When will the pain stop?

The moonlight hits her body
Illuminating her pale and fragile skin
She falls back
The ice cold water stabbing her, consuming her

The sun shines on her body
The life drained
The water carrying her to the shore

A tear falls
Her body is lowered to the ground
She will be forgotten

She wanders lonely lands
Searching
Searching for the one she lost
Her tears will fall for evermair. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 280 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Night_Child [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

A Tear Falls

Contributed by Night_Child on Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

A tear falls
Her love calls out
The memories, this house
Stained with him
Her heart torn
Their love is no more

How can he be gone?
When will the pain stop?

The moonlight hits her body
Illuminating her pale and fragile skin
She falls back
The ice cold water stabbing her, consuming her

The sun shines on her body
The life drained
The water carrying her to the shore

A tear falls
Her body is lowered to the ground
She will be forgotten

She wanders lonely lands
Searching
Searching for the one she lost
Her tears will fall for evermair.

Copyright Â© Night_Child ... [ 2003-09-13 08:05:00]
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Re: A Tear Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by squeesh on Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 03:00:56 PM AEST
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its hard losing someone we love and you captured those feelings those lost tears and souls i thought it was a really good poem
~squeesh

Re: A Tear Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by Aika on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 04:18:37 AM AEST
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Shouldn´t she go
and shout loud?
Shouldn´t she not let him go
but stop and talk?
Hard, I know, too hard to lose
but knowing the reason why
the pain slows
Such is the life
we suffer a lot
for the awareness
of the sweet moments......
I wish you your tears
stopped falling
and smile brightened
your lovely face again.....aika

Re: A Tear Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 04:51:22 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc...This is a lovely poem..you have catpured the feeling of loneliness and loss really well..
Jenni

Re: A Tear Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by xlx_chelsea_xlx on Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 06:20:23 PM AEST
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I thought the poems was wonderful if that it the right word to use.. and im not quite sure it is but great job

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