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Array ( [sid] => 23370 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Leaving You A Letter [time] => 2003-09-17 14:25:00 [hometext] => Feeling Sad Again [bodytext] => My world is just despair since you came into my life,
I guess the first month was bliss but now all we do is strife,
It’s so hard for me to be with you,
When I know that your heart isn’t true,
All we do is fight,
When you come home late at night,
Bruised and battered I wait for the sun to rise,
We sit to breakfast and soon come to a compromise,
But come Friday night the cycle starts all over again,
Flogged and wounded my heartache pains,
I cannot take it anymore I have got to bring this to an end,
You’ve hurt me so much that I don’t even want to be your friend,
So I’ll just leave you a letter with the diamond ring,
And erase what the future for us was about to bring
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Leaving You A Letter

Contributed by ruby1987 on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 02:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

My world is just despair since you came into my life,
I guess the first month was bliss but now all we do is strife,
It’s so hard for me to be with you,
When I know that your heart isn’t true,
All we do is fight,
When you come home late at night,
Bruised and battered I wait for the sun to rise,
We sit to breakfast and soon come to a compromise,
But come Friday night the cycle starts all over again,
Flogged and wounded my heartache pains,
I cannot take it anymore I have got to bring this to an end,
You’ve hurt me so much that I don’t even want to be your friend,
So I’ll just leave you a letter with the diamond ring,
And erase what the future for us was about to bring

Copyright Â© ruby1987 ... [ 2003-09-17 14:25:00]
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Re: Leaving You A Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 05:26:59 PM AEST
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Sad, so sad. This is a beautiful poem to bad it had come from such a sad place in your heart. Awesome write.

Re: Leaving You A Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by OpalDragon on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 07:01:25 PM AEST
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If this is how you are left better to get out as fast as possible...good write...strong emotion

OD

Re: Leaving You A Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 08:13:40 PM AEST
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if yer being abused you need to get out... simple as that. I loved the line that started flogged and wounded. Best of luck.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Leaving You A Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 08:13:49 PM AEST
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Oh My! Abusive relationships, just pains me. I have been there myself but it was a friend who was abusing me, I have just written a poem about it now. I will post it later. I hope that the abusive person doesn't hurt you anymore once you've left. All the best. Peace.

Love Emma.

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