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Array ( [sid] => 23445 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I Have A Little Story Here [time] => 2003-09-18 14:25:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I guess I will just let you know
why some words pierce my very heart
I understand that vile pain
that can make us want to part


That pain has been a friend of mine
through many years of tears and strife
The only thing I could control
was to die...or live this life


I guess it does sound odd to you
for me to use that term of "friend"
When life has been all ruled for you
it is a friend you can not bend

My friend had become so unruly
that I succumbed to it's demands
I took that fateful overdose
held my death right in my hands


As I lay there...waiting for the end
I thought...at least this was my choice
No more shall I be raped and beaten
or feel the that hatred in their voice


At last...now my time had come
for I had surely found the way
Now I could just pass on in peace
and...I had picked a lovely day


Somehow this was not meant to be
for my body was discovered
Life was slowly seeping out of me
my brilliant plan had been uncovered


The call was made by someone
and out the rescue came
I remember some tubes and needles
and strangers shouting out my name

Those strangers had accomplished
to undo all that I had done
They watched for real brain damage
as the morning met the sun


I had never been so angry
as the day I woke to find
My efforts had not brought to me
that eternal peace of mind


Through trial and error I journeyed
to find a way that I could cope
I needed some control of life
without it..there would be no hope


So...now I shall end this story
and I hope that you might see
When I feel your words of suicide
you will probably hear from me



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I Have A Little Story Here

Contributed by S_K_Williamson on Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 02:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



I guess I will just let you know
why some words pierce my very heart
I understand that vile pain
that can make us want to part


That pain has been a friend of mine
through many years of tears and strife
The only thing I could control
was to die...or live this life


I guess it does sound odd to you
for me to use that term of "friend"
When life has been all ruled for you
it is a friend you can not bend

My friend had become so unruly
that I succumbed to it's demands
I took that fateful overdose
held my death right in my hands


As I lay there...waiting for the end
I thought...at least this was my choice
No more shall I be raped and beaten
or feel the that hatred in their voice


At last...now my time had come
for I had surely found the way
Now I could just pass on in peace
and...I had picked a lovely day


Somehow this was not meant to be
for my body was discovered
Life was slowly seeping out of me
my brilliant plan had been uncovered


The call was made by someone
and out the rescue came
I remember some tubes and needles
and strangers shouting out my name

Those strangers had accomplished
to undo all that I had done
They watched for real brain damage
as the morning met the sun


I had never been so angry
as the day I woke to find
My efforts had not brought to me
that eternal peace of mind


Through trial and error I journeyed
to find a way that I could cope
I needed some control of life
without it..there would be no hope


So...now I shall end this story
and I hope that you might see
When I feel your words of suicide
you will probably hear from me







Copyright © S_K_Williamson ... [ 2003-09-18 14:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: I Have A Little Story Here (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 04:46:21 PM AEST
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very good wite.......


Re: I Have A Little Story Here (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 05:47:30 PM AEST
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Excellent write ... please take care ... Jan


Re: I Have A Little Story Here (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 07:19:22 PM AEST
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Very brave of you to share..and please stay strong..Dont let your talent go to waste :)You seem to have experienced a lot in your life..people like yourself,need to hear your story.




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