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[aid] => Mick
[title] => ^ She Devil ^
[time] => 2003-09-19 10:35:00
[hometext] => Im not usually so viscious,but nobody messes with my kids..not on ANY level!!!
[bodytext] => Recently I penned some thoughts,inspired by a tragic loss
Anonymously a comment was made,though I know who it was
You see this woman says she's hurt,that I took her man away
But really I didnt take him,he was offered on a silver tray
A woman scorned is dangerous,viscious and confused
But still I cannot forgive her,for my children she abused
"hopefully more pain and heart ache will come to you and your other children"
This is what she wrote for me to find
What kind of human being would have these vile thoughts cross their mind
Especially another Mother,although I cannot say she's worthy of the call
For not any mother that I know of,would wish kids pain at all
I dont blame her for her anger,so long as at me it is directed,
But to bring in little innocents,now that's where I'm affected
To be honest,in my opinion,she is a very sick puppy indeed
I apoligise on her behalf for those,her words they had to read
To leave such poison on a poem,where feelings are of such grief
Leaves me with no logical acception,I'm in total disbelief
Not because I expected better, from this woman who is scorned
But because it disrespected my baby,my angel for who I mourn
"Shame on you,you evil seed,with your low class act of spite
How dare you spit your venom,how do you sleep at night
I can see within your ugly soul,there's no niceness,not one ounce
"I don't know what your problem is,but I bet it's hard to pronouce".
This is the very reason,your husband walked away
Because you are so viscious in so many countless ways
And let me tell you just one thing,before I finish up this poem
That when you leave this beautiful earth,HELL will be your home
But until then,until you die,your prison sentence will certainly fit
You will have to live with YOURSELF,there's no worse punishment than this"
With that all said,though there's much more,I will now be on my way
Just remember that GOD is watching you,each and every day
And also this behaviour,chased your husband away"
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[informant] => LovingWhispers
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^ She Devil ^
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Recently I penned some thoughts,inspired by a tragic loss
Anonymously a comment was made,though I know who it was
You see this woman says she's hurt,that I took her man away
But really I didnt take him,he was offered on a silver tray
A woman scorned is dangerous,viscious and confused
But still I cannot forgive her,for my children she abused
"hopefully more pain and heart ache will come to you and your other children"
This is what she wrote for me to find
What kind of human being would have these vile thoughts cross their mind
Especially another Mother,although I cannot say she's worthy of the call
For not any mother that I know of,would wish kids pain at all
I dont blame her for her anger,so long as at me it is directed,
But to bring in little innocents,now that's where I'm affected
To be honest,in my opinion,she is a very sick puppy indeed
I apoligise on her behalf for those,her words they had to read
To leave such poison on a poem,where feelings are of such grief
Leaves me with no logical acception,I'm in total disbelief
Not because I expected better, from this woman who is scorned
But because it disrespected my baby,my angel for who I mourn
"Shame on you,you evil seed,with your low class act of spite
How dare you spit your venom,how do you sleep at night
I can see within your ugly soul,there's no niceness,not one ounce
"I don't know what your problem is,but I bet it's hard to pronouce".
This is the very reason,your husband walked away
Because you are so viscious in so many countless ways
And let me tell you just one thing,before I finish up this poem
That when you leave this beautiful earth,HELL will be your home
But until then,until you die,your prison sentence will certainly fit
You will have to live with YOURSELF,there's no worse punishment than this"
With that all said,though there's much more,I will now be on my way
Just remember that GOD is watching you,each and every day
And also this behaviour,chased your husband away"
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LovingWhispers
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Re: ^ She Devil ^
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 11:12:34 AM AEST
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God hates ugly
No one should ever wish harm on any child
Shari |
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Re: ^ She Devil ^
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 11:38:18 AM AEST
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I am so sorry that someone found a way to hurt your beautiful spirit. No one has the right to wish children harm,even scorned women!!!
But they seem to lash out at the innocent because they are the low lifes of society. I had one lash out at me also(not on here,thank goodness) but I can relate to the pain you feel. May you overcome this ignorance that she showed you,and be the special spirit that you are...forgive her...and move on....MAYBE one day....God will forgive her too.
p.s.Forgiveness is hard,I know,but it makes us the "good ones " of a diminishing society!
Bless you "whispers" for standing up to ignorance!
Angel always...godspeed,my friend,joni
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Re: ^ She Devil ^
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by jaeann on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 11:44:01 AM AEST
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she was not thinking as a mother thinks......she was thinking like a child herself.........
good work!!! |
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Re: ^ She Devil ^
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by roisin on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 11:53:02 AM AEST
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very well written Sharon..I was quite upset as well when I saw the comment...
rosie |
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Re: ^ She Devil ^
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 04:43:01 PM AEST
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It's because of me that these comments are being left for Sharon. The last one was unforgivable and I apologize to her for it though that is of little help or consolation now.
If it's neccesary for me to leave this site to put an end to it I will. I dont like the thought of leaving, and it isnt running away, it;'s the fact that no one here needs to see such hateful and cold hearted words. Rest assured I will continue to be assailed by the anger but at least it wont be vented as comments to her.
Larry |
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Re: ^ She Devil ^
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 07:15:40 PM AEST
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Ouch.. So sorry this is happening, Whispers.. I don't think all this is called for...
Hope it all ends soon. I'm behind you all the way.
Jenni |
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Re: ^ She Devil ^
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by Crow on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 07:23:40 PM AEST
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I don`t think you will have to leave larry, if we all just stand together. no one I know will tke a seat when kids are being hurt. so please don`t go. I must have missed the ugly remark
never where I should be, so my dear friend L.w. if you have more trouble won`t take long to start a "Wolf Pack" you are loved here lean on your friends. please let me know where the remark is posted. your friend Crow |
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Re: ^ She Devil ^
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by shelby on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 07:44:08 PM AEST
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noone has the right to lash out at you nor your children thats way uncalled for!!!!!!!!!!
Michelle |
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Re: ^ She Devil ^
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 04:38:57 PM AEST
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Very angry a good vent! Although you shouldn't wish hell on anyone. People like that just aren't worth your time.
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Re: ^ She Devil ^
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by Walt on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 08:33:13 AM AEST
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I look in the wind to hear a voice often all I find are whisphers. Failure is hard for any to accept, failure of self is the hardest, striking out at another is cruel, causing pain only leads to more pain. Remember love may not overcome all but it will allow your soul peace. Stay a cut above the pettiness, control the desire of revenge, walk the high ground.
Walt |
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