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You can’t
Shut me down
You can’t shut me up

Your body, I tremble beneath you
Your heart and I can feel you
And you may not want to open up for me
But, I am the one, if you could just believe.

Forever I have allowed this heart to guide me
And it drove me right into you.
And there was a crash and I couldn’t finish my sentence
And there was a feeling and you can’t deny this

Emotions
Crossing over
From me to you

And pleasure
I don’t feel worthy of the
Beauty that is you

Forgive me, if I seem to forward in this thinking
But, you will be grave if you don’t see me

Don’t push me away
Don’t push me away
Don’t push me away

My sweet, my sour, my life goes sour
Just don’t walk away
Feel the hour
It gets darker
It gets darker

I feel the need to kiss you now. I feel the need to push you now. I feel the need, the need, and the need

For your love.
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Need

Contributed by alisialynn on Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I want to write about you. I can’t stop feeling this love
You can’t
Shut me down
You can’t shut me up

Your body, I tremble beneath you
Your heart and I can feel you
And you may not want to open up for me
But, I am the one, if you could just believe.

Forever I have allowed this heart to guide me
And it drove me right into you.
And there was a crash and I couldn’t finish my sentence
And there was a feeling and you can’t deny this

Emotions
Crossing over
From me to you

And pleasure
I don’t feel worthy of the
Beauty that is you

Forgive me, if I seem to forward in this thinking
But, you will be grave if you don’t see me

Don’t push me away
Don’t push me away
Don’t push me away

My sweet, my sour, my life goes sour
Just don’t walk away
Feel the hour
It gets darker
It gets darker

I feel the need to kiss you now. I feel the need to push you now. I feel the need, the need, and the need

For your love.

Copyright Â© alisialynn ... [ 2003-09-21 02:05:00]
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Re: Need (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 07:14:56 AM AEST
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Nice poem...!

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