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no where to turn
no sign telling me to stay
no lesson learned
walking the uphill trail
day by darkened year
take the fork of fail
there's a turn up there for fear
the rocks are big and many
the incline easy but steep
see the tails down penny
I warn you do not keep
the waterfall too fierce
the shallow parts too deep
be watchful of all you sow
to avoid the painful reap
the sky is roaring thunder
hear the eagle cry
one by one you see
the little girl parts die [comments] => 6 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 13 [informant] => jaeann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

ADVERSITY

Contributed by jaeann on Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 04:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Alone on the freeway
no where to turn
no sign telling me to stay
no lesson learned
walking the uphill trail
day by darkened year
take the fork of fail
there's a turn up there for fear
the rocks are big and many
the incline easy but steep
see the tails down penny
I warn you do not keep
the waterfall too fierce
the shallow parts too deep
be watchful of all you sow
to avoid the painful reap
the sky is roaring thunder
hear the eagle cry
one by one you see
the little girl parts die

Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2003-09-26 04:45:00]
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Re: ADVERSITY (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 05:32:55 AM AEST
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Ominious, and painful. Awesome poem

Re: ADVERSITY (User Rating: 1 )
by Aika on Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 06:55:49 AM AEST
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Lovely and so sad
Wishing you all the best... aika:-)

Re: ADVERSITY (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 08:54:45 AM AEST
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your words are strong and talk directly to the soul...such a sad song
Shari

Re: ADVERSITY (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 07:33:02 PM AEST
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'little girl parts die' Whats that about? Is it about puberty didn't quite understand that, but a good poem as always. Loved the imagery u painted in my head.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: ADVERSITY (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 11:49:02 PM AEST
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J your great! i`m crazy about your writing, Crow

Re: ADVERSITY (User Rating: 1 )
by eternityandaday4u on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 12:06:20 AM AEST
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great poem! i loved it! so sad and and painful. a song sung straight to the soul! I hope you the best and great faith to you! always
TIna eternityandaday4u

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