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no match for the changing inside.

So thoughtless of empty halls,
careful not to make a sound.

Never disturb what lies in rest,
A fool`s thought.

Everyone I have ever loved,
I pray still love me today.

Where do I go to search for me once more,
my winter of empty halls...........Crow

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Fool`s Thought

Contributed by crow on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 12:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Dark clouds of approaching winter,
no match for the changing inside.

So thoughtless of empty halls,
careful not to make a sound.

Never disturb what lies in rest,
A fool`s thought.

Everyone I have ever loved,
I pray still love me today.

Where do I go to search for me once more,
my winter of empty halls...........Crow

Copyright © crow ... [ 2003-09-28 00:35:00]
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Re: Fool`s Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 12:40:19 AM AEST
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Hey it was some good thoughs put into an excellent write.
Emma.

Re: Fool`s Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 12:44:07 AM AEST
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"You" are found in all you do and say....and all you do and say is beautiful...Search no more my friend...just listen.Self doubt is dancing around you...do not become its partner.Move onto another song. ;) Im always here..Sharon

Re: Fool`s Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 02:20:00 AM AEST
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Interesting write, Crow... I have to agree with Whispers...
Jenni

Re: Fool`s Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 03:00:40 AM AEST
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such feelings I knew...beautifully written. venkat

Re: Fool`s Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 04:12:45 AM AEST
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ahhhhh winter is coming, is it not....crow, you touch me so..... you read my soul with your thoughts and words.......

Re: Fool`s Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 07:58:56 AM AEST
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have no words for this one
but that I am there for you
Shari

Re: Fool`s Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 09:42:42 PM AEST
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What a wonderful observation Crow.
Seasons may come and seasons may go,
I do feel differently in side with each one.
Summer is over and it's filled with fun,
Winter approaches and for some reason,
It always seem so comforting to me.
I wonder if it's because like a tree,
we draw within ourselves to renew....
I the love the winter Crow.....the blankets of snow....seem so cosy, so protective somehow...Perhaps that's why you feel emptiness in your halls....you see coldness.
But I know you....they won't stay empty long.
You'll reach out and love and make someone very strong.,'cause that just you!
lovingcritters
ConSue

Re: Fool`s Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by painted_echos on Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 01:54:55 AM AEST
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where are you afraid to go crow? compassion flows from your heart for those you write about. but do you accept what flows from another into your own? do you fear to let someone in...to protect your heart with empty halls? time to open the windows and doors, before it gets too cold. (this.. from miss presumptuous, herself, who by the way, opened her heart and got smashed!)

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