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Going out into the "real world."
You may not say that exactly,
But that's what I pick up on
Whenever I talk to you.

You want to drop out of college,
You were afraid to go on a feild trip,
You worry me constantly.

I don't think that's all that there is either.
You feign a happy face and act
Like you really could care less about what's
Going on in your life online.

I know that it's different when
I really get you to talk to me. That's why
I worry about you so much.

Maybe there's more to it but I can't figure it out.
More to it? Of course there is.
Hell if I know anymore.

No, don't get me wrong.
Not giving up on you.
I can't because you mean so
Much to me as a friend.

No.. you're much, much
More then a friend. Can't reduce you
To being that anymore.
You're truly a sister to me,

If not by blood but by something else.
Is it by soul or mind?
I would have to say soul.
I think that's why I keep on getting so worried about everything.

Soul.
It's why I feel whenever you're hurting.
It's what lets me know.
It's what lets me tell you that you mean the world to me.
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Soul Sisters

Contributed by Angelic_Demon on Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



You say that you're terrified of
Going out into the "real world."
You may not say that exactly,
But that's what I pick up on
Whenever I talk to you.

You want to drop out of college,
You were afraid to go on a feild trip,
You worry me constantly.

I don't think that's all that there is either.
You feign a happy face and act
Like you really could care less about what's
Going on in your life online.

I know that it's different when
I really get you to talk to me. That's why
I worry about you so much.

Maybe there's more to it but I can't figure it out.
More to it? Of course there is.
Hell if I know anymore.

No, don't get me wrong.
Not giving up on you.
I can't because you mean so
Much to me as a friend.

No.. you're much, much
More then a friend. Can't reduce you
To being that anymore.
You're truly a sister to me,

If not by blood but by something else.
Is it by soul or mind?
I would have to say soul.
I think that's why I keep on getting so worried about everything.

Soul.
It's why I feel whenever you're hurting.
It's what lets me know.
It's what lets me tell you that you mean the world to me.




Copyright © Angelic_Demon ... [ 2003-09-29 12:35:00]
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Re: Soul Sisters (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 12:59:31 PM AEST
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Oh my gosh this is beautiful!! I wish I could see her face when she reads it! Everyone needs someone to worry about them. And she's got plenty of people doing that for her, lol. This is such a sweet tribute to one of the world's most precious people. If this doesn't make her feel loved I don't know what will! And on a side note, you need to start writing more often, dammit!! :D

~ Dee


Re: Soul Sisters (User Rating: 1 )
by sugarboy on Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 01:17:31 PM AEST
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This is a very moving poem, and it shows a lot of love for the person you're writing to.


Re: Soul Sisters (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 10:12:08 AM AEST
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~:*simply beautiful*:~ like the two of you are, hugs n' love, me xxx


Re: Soul Sisters (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 04:04:30 AM AEST
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Beautiful Mara, i do wish you would write more, you have the talent, now all you need is the confidence,

Love you and hey, you'll always be family to me hun, you and Nessa both

Love, Hugs 'n Kisses
- Becca


Re: Soul Sisters (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 09:01:44 PM AEST
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such care and so much love is this piece, a wonderful work of art for Becca, hope she realizes she's very loved by all take care Val




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