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Array ( [sid] => 24108 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Torture [time] => 2003-09-30 02:45:00 [hometext] => Something I wrote while angry with someone. [bodytext] => I am going to rip your eyes open with fishing hooks,
I want you to watch as I make you suffer,
I despise you and I hope you regret what you have done,
But no apologies are going to get you out of this!

I am going to drown you in your own vomit,
Making you choke on your on diseases,
You have infected me we with your existence,
You have made me sick just being in my presence,

I am going to put your plastic face into a blender,
You had to have the looks... the best that money could buy,
And the judged the people around you like your beauty was natural,
Let's see how people like your looks after I am done with you,

I am going to sow up your a** and keep feeding you the lies you gave me,
Watching as gluttony takes you over and you guts split open,
You were always so thin with the perfect figure,
When I am done you will be seen as the pile of rotting waste that you are,

I am going to stab you with an Aids infested needle,
Infecting you with diseases that will make you corrode from the inside,
Eternal suffering is what you gave the people you judged,
Look at yourself now... your one of us. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 645 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Dark-Poet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Torture

Contributed by Dark-Poet on Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 02:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I am going to rip your eyes open with fishing hooks,
I want you to watch as I make you suffer,
I despise you and I hope you regret what you have done,
But no apologies are going to get you out of this!

I am going to drown you in your own vomit,
Making you choke on your on diseases,
You have infected me we with your existence,
You have made me sick just being in my presence,

I am going to put your plastic face into a blender,
You had to have the looks... the best that money could buy,
And the judged the people around you like your beauty was natural,
Let's see how people like your looks after I am done with you,

I am going to sow up your a** and keep feeding you the lies you gave me,
Watching as gluttony takes you over and you guts split open,
You were always so thin with the perfect figure,
When I am done you will be seen as the pile of rotting waste that you are,

I am going to stab you with an Aids infested needle,
Infecting you with diseases that will make you corrode from the inside,
Eternal suffering is what you gave the people you judged,
Look at yourself now... your one of us.




Copyright © Dark-Poet ... [ 2003-09-30 02:45:00]
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Re: Torture (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 11:16:27 AM AEST
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Whoa... that's some intense anger. I hope writing this calmed you a little and you don't go sew up anybody's rear end. That just wouldn't be pleasant from either end, lol.

~ Moonlit


Re: Torture (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 01:23:18 AM AEST
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I loved this very graphically written. I can't say enough except I hope you got out most of your anger in this one.

Bobo (Joel)




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