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Fleeting Sanity
Contributed by
walt
on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Light falls across
a darken room
leaving an image there
I am not sure
friend or foe
don't really care
Reality is slow
the line thin
mind torn with wear
Pushed to limits
it screams out
is this fair
Years of work
electrons flow
waves are square
Time has come
to leave this
world bare
The last nerve
stepped on
does anybody care
Light falls across
a darken room
I see it there
My fleeting sanity
Copyright ©
walt
... [
2003-10-01 00:45:00]
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Re: Fleeting Sanity
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 01:09:51 AM AEST
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hey, I loved this I liked how it was written and just everything. Wow great job.
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Re: Fleeting Sanity
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 01:22:02 AM AEST
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| Excellent! I see it all..Im there in the darkened room..Clever! |
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Re: Fleeting Sanity
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by EmSal on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 01:34:34 AM AEST
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Hey I agree...great write.
Emma. |
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