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A faceless evil I can’t see
A darkness calling out my name
Every time I feel it it’s the same
I never try to run and hide
I want to feel it burning deep inside
It doesn’t have to try to break me
Because I let it overtake me
Once the darkness is inside
It casts a shadow in my mind
Hatred courses in my blood
Rushing through me like a flood
In an instant it has control
Burning black within my soul
And through my own blood clouded eyes
I see everyone that I despise
With every long and seething breath
I wish on them violence and death
I feel the torment in my heart
Slowly tearing me apart
But I don’t care, although I should
The evil in me feels so good
And just when I think it is too late
That I’ve become an effigy of hate
It leaves me suddenly-until a time when
It can come and consume me once again.
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Hatred

Contributed by scott on Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

It stops, it stares, it targets me
A faceless evil I can’t see
A darkness calling out my name
Every time I feel it it’s the same
I never try to run and hide
I want to feel it burning deep inside
It doesn’t have to try to break me
Because I let it overtake me
Once the darkness is inside
It casts a shadow in my mind
Hatred courses in my blood
Rushing through me like a flood
In an instant it has control
Burning black within my soul
And through my own blood clouded eyes
I see everyone that I despise
With every long and seething breath
I wish on them violence and death
I feel the torment in my heart
Slowly tearing me apart
But I don’t care, although I should
The evil in me feels so good
And just when I think it is too late
That I’ve become an effigy of hate
It leaves me suddenly-until a time when
It can come and consume me once again.

Copyright Â© scott ... [ 2003-10-04 06:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 11:17:35 AM AEST
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I hate this. Nah, I'm just kidding. It's nice and pretty. I give it a 3.9 on the Nortiscale.

Re: Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 05:01:26 AM AEST
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This is amazing, the kind of poems i like to find, it flows fantastically, if you dont mind can i put your words to music, i play guitar, and ive fallen in love with this poem. get back to me x x x

Re: Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 01:42:49 PM AEST
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this is enwrapping, i loved it.
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Re: Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by eternityandaday4u on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 02:15:53 AM AEST
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This poem was awesome! you have talent! i loved it alot! keep the greatness coming!

Always & 4-ever
Eternityandaday4u

Re: Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by eternityandaday4u on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 02:18:23 AM AEST
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This poem was awesome! you have talent! i loved it alot! Never fail to let your true self shine through! true beauty is skin deep. keep the greatness coming!

Always & 4-ever
Eternityandaday4u

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