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Studying everyday at the slaughter house.
We're like animals being tested upon,
the empiricism is pulling us apart.
An experiment in the making,
waiting for our results.
We're like roast beef between the buns,
after our encouter with the guns,
cooked over an oven of misery and shame.
The government is the professor,
barbarically playing God.
Some half human/half beast creation,
politically inhuman-
we are scarred. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 43 [informant] => broken-glass [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Repulsion

Contributed by broken-glass on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 02:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Trepidation for a want of confidence.
Studying everyday at the slaughter house.
We're like animals being tested upon,
the empiricism is pulling us apart.
An experiment in the making,
waiting for our results.
We're like roast beef between the buns,
after our encouter with the guns,
cooked over an oven of misery and shame.
The government is the professor,
barbarically playing God.
Some half human/half beast creation,
politically inhuman-
we are scarred.

Copyright © broken-glass ... [ 2003-10-06 02:25:00]
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Re: Repulsion (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 01:11:04 PM AEST
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Wow I loved this
cooked over an oven of misery and shame.
That line was AWESOME. I feel the same way sometimes great write.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Repulsion (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 02:59:24 PM AEST
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Dear Broken Glass.
This is one of your best poems BG,
I read it three times just to get the most meaning I could.
It was dazzling, when I realized what it was you were saying.
Hang in there and endure dear friend....the day is coming....very soon...when all of this will end!
Warm Love,
Lovingcritters
Connie Sue

Re: Repulsion (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 10:08:33 PM AEST
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awww.....i'm sorry you're in that pickle.....i can still feel that vile taste in my mouth when they brought out a feline in high school...and i had just lost my companion of 18 years... my kitty saphire....stand up for what you believe in.....good for you!!!!! awesome wording and emotion in this piece....

Re: Repulsion (User Rating: 1 )
by dolly_dagger on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 08:09:17 PM AEST
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damnit...ur so much better at expressing urself this was than i am. ur poetry is much more eloquent than mine. *sob*

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