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Array ( [sid] => 24487 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Contradiction [time] => 2003-10-06 07:45:00 [hometext] => hmmmmmmm, needs work [bodytext] => I told you my biggest secret
To keep what we had true
But you went and told another
What the ***** is wrong with you?!?

The pain of this will never heal
For you betrayed my trust
Do you have any idea what it's doing to me?
When you told of my love and my lust

I wanted your support
To tell me it's okay
But you let my secret out
For this - you must pay!

So get the ***** away from me
I don't want to see your face
I loved you so much it hurt
Now I hate you for this disgrace

I was once a generous person
But you've turned me into a witch
You thought you knew me well
But introducing your new friend - the B****

Now you'll never know how it scarred me
You'll never feel my pain
You will never again see me cry
Fo my deeply hidden strain.

I can pretend that nothing happened
On the surface - we are fine
But watch out, i'll get my revenge
In the hours the sun don't shine

I hate you more than anyone
But I love you just as much
My life's a contradiction
Ever confused by your touch.

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Contradiction

Contributed by Katie-Kate on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 07:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I told you my biggest secret
To keep what we had true
But you went and told another
What the ***** is wrong with you?!?

The pain of this will never heal
For you betrayed my trust
Do you have any idea what it's doing to me?
When you told of my love and my lust

I wanted your support
To tell me it's okay
But you let my secret out
For this - you must pay!

So get the ***** away from me
I don't want to see your face
I loved you so much it hurt
Now I hate you for this disgrace

I was once a generous person
But you've turned me into a witch
You thought you knew me well
But introducing your new friend - the B****

Now you'll never know how it scarred me
You'll never feel my pain
You will never again see me cry
Fo my deeply hidden strain.

I can pretend that nothing happened
On the surface - we are fine
But watch out, i'll get my revenge
In the hours the sun don't shine

I hate you more than anyone
But I love you just as much
My life's a contradiction
Ever confused by your touch.

Copyright © Katie-Kate ... [ 2003-10-06 07:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Contradiction (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 11:43:44 AM AEST
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Well, that's love for ya. Whoever said it isn't simple sure was making an understatement. Great write, I personally don't think it needs any work. :)

~ Moonlit

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