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Array ( [sid] => 24508 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Break The Habit [time] => 2003-10-06 11:18:42 [hometext] => I guess there comes a time you have to stand up and take the blame. Not one of my best, but I wrote it nonetheless, so here it is. [bodytext] => Everybody makes a mistake sometimes
And I'll do anything to set it right
'Cause what we have, we'd be fools to let go
We can start over and save tomorrow
Rewrite the way the story ends
If you'll open your heart again
We could have a happy ending
If you give love a chance to win

I know that you were right and I was wrong
I hope not all your faith in me is gone
'Cause I believe our best is yet to come
And I would give you the moon and the sun
To make you feel the way I feel
And prove to you my love is real
I'll make it up to you, I swear
I'll show you just how much I care

Sometimes you've gotta leave the past behind
Let it go and please don't turn out the light
'Cause you know you're the best thing in my life
I don't know what happened but it's not alright
I must've lost my mind
I'll break the habit tonight

I know I hurt you and I'm so sorry
I've gotta change and blame it all on me
If you forgive me, I'll do what it takes
Just please don't let go 'cause my heart would break
Now our love will be much sweeter
And I'll look a little deeper
I promise you won't regret it
Believe me, I won't forget it

I gave you problems 'cause you gave me your heart
I know we can win 'cause we've come so far
Whisper my name and I will deliver
Because I live for the love that you give
No matter what, we've gotta try
'Cause there's just no good in goodbye
Straight from the heart, honest and true
Promise I will be there for you

I'd retrace every wrong move if I could
And if I knew how to change it, I would
Take back all the things I said if I could
I'll stand up and take the blame 'cause I should
I'll get it back to good
I'd change it all if I could

In my dreams I'll be taking you with me
To keep you here I'd beg on my knees
I wish that I didn't need you so bad
In your heart is where I need to get back
'Cause you're my hope for the future
If you let me, I'll stay forever
Because I need you more and more
Like I never have before

No one needs you like I do
I'm always gonna love you
I never meant to let you down
I would paint it on the walls
Because I'm the one at fault
I'll take all my shame to the grave [comments] => 3 [counter] => 402 [topic] => 50 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )
Break The Habit

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 11:18:42 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



Everybody makes a mistake sometimes
And I'll do anything to set it right
'Cause what we have, we'd be fools to let go
We can start over and save tomorrow
Rewrite the way the story ends
If you'll open your heart again
We could have a happy ending
If you give love a chance to win

I know that you were right and I was wrong
I hope not all your faith in me is gone
'Cause I believe our best is yet to come
And I would give you the moon and the sun
To make you feel the way I feel
And prove to you my love is real
I'll make it up to you, I swear
I'll show you just how much I care

Sometimes you've gotta leave the past behind
Let it go and please don't turn out the light
'Cause you know you're the best thing in my life
I don't know what happened but it's not alright
I must've lost my mind
I'll break the habit tonight

I know I hurt you and I'm so sorry
I've gotta change and blame it all on me
If you forgive me, I'll do what it takes
Just please don't let go 'cause my heart would break
Now our love will be much sweeter
And I'll look a little deeper
I promise you won't regret it
Believe me, I won't forget it

I gave you problems 'cause you gave me your heart
I know we can win 'cause we've come so far
Whisper my name and I will deliver
Because I live for the love that you give
No matter what, we've gotta try
'Cause there's just no good in goodbye
Straight from the heart, honest and true
Promise I will be there for you

I'd retrace every wrong move if I could
And if I knew how to change it, I would
Take back all the things I said if I could
I'll stand up and take the blame 'cause I should
I'll get it back to good
I'd change it all if I could

In my dreams I'll be taking you with me
To keep you here I'd beg on my knees
I wish that I didn't need you so bad
In your heart is where I need to get back
'Cause you're my hope for the future
If you let me, I'll stay forever
Because I need you more and more
Like I never have before

No one needs you like I do
I'm always gonna love you
I never meant to let you down
I would paint it on the walls
Because I'm the one at fault
I'll take all my shame to the grave




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-10-06 11:18:42]
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Re: Break The Habit (User Rating: 1 )
by cant-skate on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 01:15:43 PM AEST
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touchingggg ! keep on ! c u somewhere


Re: Break The Habit (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 06:02:55 PM AEST
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inspired by linkin park huh??
this write's awesome Moonlit. ;)


Re: Break The Habit (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 10:58:46 PM AEST
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this poem is brave. you are a great writter! It doesn't take much to paste the blame on someone else but it takes pride and courage to paste the blame on him/her self! just know when you are to blame and when your not! Great poem!!!!




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