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Array ( [sid] => 24517 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fake [time] => 2003-10-06 14:57:20 [hometext] => Lately I'm just not all there. And nobody seems to get it. So I have to pretend to feel a way I don't, which only makes things that much worse. [bodytext] => Everything seems so faded
My memories feel like dreams
I can't tell what's real
And what isn't as it seems

Everything is so distant
Something just doesn't feel right
Something is wrong here
Did I lose my mind last night?

I'm so tired
Wrapped up in self-denial
Sick of this
I feel there's something I've missed
I wish I didn't feel that way
But I can't escape

The pain is so physical
It hurts beyond all feeling
I need some relief
A little bit of healing

Cut my wrist to see it bleed
Close my eyes and cease to breathe
Need something that's real
'Cause I am what you perceive

I'm so fake
Next to you my soul's erased
What you want
Is what I give though it haunts
It follows me all the time
And those words aren't mine

Wake me up
Don't worry if I'm cut up
I love you
That's one thing I know is true
Hope you don't mind I'm not all there
I think you're my prayer [comments] => 6 [counter] => 316 [topic] => 48 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Fake

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 02:57:20 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Everything seems so faded
My memories feel like dreams
I can't tell what's real
And what isn't as it seems

Everything is so distant
Something just doesn't feel right
Something is wrong here
Did I lose my mind last night?

I'm so tired
Wrapped up in self-denial
Sick of this
I feel there's something I've missed
I wish I didn't feel that way
But I can't escape

The pain is so physical
It hurts beyond all feeling
I need some relief
A little bit of healing

Cut my wrist to see it bleed
Close my eyes and cease to breathe
Need something that's real
'Cause I am what you perceive

I'm so fake
Next to you my soul's erased
What you want
Is what I give though it haunts
It follows me all the time
And those words aren't mine

Wake me up
Don't worry if I'm cut up
I love you
That's one thing I know is true
Hope you don't mind I'm not all there
I think you're my prayer




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-10-06 14:57:20]
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Re: Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 03:02:16 PM AEST
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sometimes just putting it on paper
helps it took alot of courage to
put this out there
stay strong
with love
Putter


Re: Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 04:10:00 PM AEST
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Meow, meow, meow. 3.5 on the Nortiscale.


Re: Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 04:47:50 PM AEST
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ah moonlit

hopefully this feeling will pass - and things will look brighter.


hugs
merry


Re: Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 07:02:49 PM AEST
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I'm sorry you feel this way, Moonlit... you shuldn't have to pretend to feel what you don't. Hope this is temporary..
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 12:49:48 AM AEST
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Oh My!!!! I loved this poem...I can so relate...it's so painful...I hope that you get your prayer. All the best.

Emma.


Re: Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 02:17:11 AM AEST
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oh dear, big hugs and love dee, im always here for you, you know, nessa x




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