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Array ( [sid] => 24837 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You (Mine to Hold) [time] => 2003-10-11 10:22:56 [hometext] => Written about a far away love that seems so perfect...lots of comments are welcomed and appreciated... [bodytext] => Your eyes
I could write a thousand words about your eyes
Their beautiful darkness intrigues my own
To stare deep inside longingly
Wishing you were mine to hold

Your lips
I could write a thousand words about your lips
So full and pink and beautiful
Encouraging me to lean over
And feel their softness on my own
I wish you were mine to hold

Your arms
I could write a thousand words about your arms
Strong and inviting, they leave me hoping
That you'll swallow me up in them
And shelter me from the storm
I so wish you were mine to hold

Your charm
I could write a thousand words about your charm
Makes me giggle like a schoolgirl at your wit and intellect
I gravitate to all you have to say
I want you to be mine to hold

You are the perfect man
Although idealistic as I do sound
I know you're only human
But I can't help but daydream on
And pretend you are mine to hold... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 2 [informant] => lgcmusic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
You (Mine to Hold)

Contributed by lgcmusic on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 10:22:56 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Your eyes
I could write a thousand words about your eyes
Their beautiful darkness intrigues my own
To stare deep inside longingly
Wishing you were mine to hold

Your lips
I could write a thousand words about your lips
So full and pink and beautiful
Encouraging me to lean over
And feel their softness on my own
I wish you were mine to hold

Your arms
I could write a thousand words about your arms
Strong and inviting, they leave me hoping
That you'll swallow me up in them
And shelter me from the storm
I so wish you were mine to hold

Your charm
I could write a thousand words about your charm
Makes me giggle like a schoolgirl at your wit and intellect
I gravitate to all you have to say
I want you to be mine to hold

You are the perfect man
Although idealistic as I do sound
I know you're only human
But I can't help but daydream on
And pretend you are mine to hold...




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Re: You (Mine to Hold) (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 10:28:31 AM AEST
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I could write a thousand reasons why i love this poem.
A beautiful write, well done.
I love it.


Re: You (Mine to Hold) (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 10:33:47 AM AEST
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Lgc, this is very beautiful.... Well done!!!!
Jenni


Re: You (Mine to Hold) (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 10:44:44 AM AEST
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I love this poem- the way you describe him is so picturesque. Great write!


Re: You (Mine to Hold) (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 11:13:43 AM AEST
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Your poem is very well structured
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I wish your dream of love comes true
And life deals happily with you,
Here and there some folks make it,
Here and there some folks take it...


Re: You (Mine to Hold) (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 09:06:08 PM AEST
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This is beautiful... I love it


Re: You (Mine to Hold) (User Rating: 1 )
by fredmonte101 on Saturday, 14th June 2014 @ 02:12:22 PM AEST
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Now that was really good! I sure hope you find Mr. Perfect adn then I hope you can Hold onto Him! Good write.




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