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Array ( [sid] => 24843 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Pain Within [time] => 2003-10-11 12:17:40 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You cant stand your own skin
You think if only I could break free
Escape from the weights on my feet
The pain flows through your veins
Floating beneath your skin
Feeling it in every part of you
Eating at your skin
Tearing at your flesh
It travels to your heart
And takes on the deepest part
It rips and it breaks
Pulling all your feelings apart
Till theirs just no more pain it can take
That’s when your skin begins to crawl
Your bones begin to shake
Something inside of you just trying to escape
You open it up hoping to set it free
But really its darkness covering thee
He makes you think it’ll disappear
He makes you think that no one will care
You think to yourself …if only they knew
The pain that I’ve felt
They would know why I slice myself
But that is his hold on you
He makes you think you can’t make it through
And then he whispers “there's no one here for you”

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The Pain Within

Contributed by hope on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 12:17:40 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

You cant stand your own skin
You think if only I could break free
Escape from the weights on my feet
The pain flows through your veins
Floating beneath your skin
Feeling it in every part of you
Eating at your skin
Tearing at your flesh
It travels to your heart
And takes on the deepest part
It rips and it breaks
Pulling all your feelings apart
Till theirs just no more pain it can take
That’s when your skin begins to crawl
Your bones begin to shake
Something inside of you just trying to escape
You open it up hoping to set it free
But really its darkness covering thee
He makes you think it’ll disappear
He makes you think that no one will care
You think to yourself …if only they knew
The pain that I’ve felt
They would know why I slice myself
But that is his hold on you
He makes you think you can’t make it through
And then he whispers “there's no one here for you”

Copyright Â© hope ... [ 2003-10-11 12:17:40]
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Re: The Pain Within (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 04:38:46 PM AEST
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Sad and good write. Stay well!
Saira

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