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Array ( [sid] => 25175 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Don't Want To Be Free [time] => 2003-10-16 18:47:52 [hometext] => I wrote this for someone...but I have not a clue who. I really don't. *Wonders* [bodytext] => Don't let me lay here and just close my eyes
Don't let my life flash before me with my last breath
Why are you sitting there and not crying?
I am dieing in your arms
You are holding me while I take my last breath
But your not sad.
Are you in shock?
Or do you just not care?
I don't want to go to the Lord
Because he is not you
Don't let me lay here and just die
Don't let my life flash before my eyes
Its not my time, even though you think it is.
I can't handle it!
I DON'T WANT TO BE FREE! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Breezer08 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

I Don't Want To Be Free

Contributed by Breezer08 on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 06:47:52 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Don't let me lay here and just close my eyes
Don't let my life flash before me with my last breath
Why are you sitting there and not crying?
I am dieing in your arms
You are holding me while I take my last breath
But your not sad.
Are you in shock?
Or do you just not care?
I don't want to go to the Lord
Because he is not you
Don't let me lay here and just die
Don't let my life flash before my eyes
Its not my time, even though you think it is.
I can't handle it!
I DON'T WANT TO BE FREE!

Copyright © Breezer08 ... [ 2003-10-16 18:47:52]
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Re: I Don't Want To Be Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 07:30:16 AM AEST
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I often just write poems like this one for no apparent reason. A few of my most earliest posts were for no-one intended, though to the naked eye they would have sounded as though I was suffering from a major breakup or death. Anyhow, a very enjoyable write, and very well written for a poem that isn't aimed at anyone in particular. I enjoyed it :D
-hugz-stacey

Re: I Don't Want To Be Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 04:04:07 PM AEST
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A lot of deep feelings here - very emotional - good write - i like your poem very much

merry

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