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Array ( [sid] => 25257 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Given up [time] => 2003-10-18 02:52:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => When love is torn and life is spend
And all the pieces fall out of place
Is giving up the thing that is meant
Or just wanting everything to be erased
When you fall to the ground
Will you rise to your feet again
Will you lay there without a sound
Or will you get through the all suffering
and pain
When tears are shed
Will you sit there with misery and shame
When blood is bled
Will you give up the game
When there's no sign of hope
Will you sit there and watch all the pieces all out of place
With all this pain where will you cope
You hide your face
Hidden from the light
And without a trace
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Given up

Contributed by youngpoet1989 on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 02:52:46 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

When love is torn and life is spend
And all the pieces fall out of place
Is giving up the thing that is meant
Or just wanting everything to be erased
When you fall to the ground
Will you rise to your feet again
Will you lay there without a sound
Or will you get through the all suffering
and pain
When tears are shed
Will you sit there with misery and shame
When blood is bled
Will you give up the game
When there's no sign of hope
Will you sit there and watch all the pieces all out of place
With all this pain where will you cope
You hide your face
Hidden from the light
And without a trace
You were gone without a sight

Copyright © youngpoet1989 ... [ 2003-10-18 02:52:46]
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Re: Given up (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 02:57:44 AM AEST
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Good questions..but we somehow go on..dont we??
Thought provoking write..I like :)

Re: Given up (User Rating: 1 )
by TearS on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 03:54:28 AM AEST
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Well, this is hope and this is really a question should be asked...I liked it....Keep writing youngpoet....

Re: Given up (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 06:53:42 PM AEST
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I like this although don't give up there's always something to live for and it would be a tragedy if u ever stopped writing.

Bobo (Joel)

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