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Array ( [sid] => 25366 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Loving Nurse [time] => 2003-10-20 01:02:36 [hometext] => There are many words to describe her...... Loving was not one of them........... [bodytext] => Why did you choose health care,
Why did you choose me,
I may have wanted to kill myself,
Why did you think you could do it for me??

I dont understand,
You said you were helping me,
But really you tried snuffing me out.

A simple mistake,
You say it wasnt intentional,
Explain to me,
Why there was four times my dose.

I paid you good money,
Didnt make you work hard,
Trusted you with my life.

I wonder if you were really a nurse,
Doesnt matter now though,
You wont be allowed to practice,
After you tried taking my life.
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My Loving Nurse

Contributed by Kalika on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 01:02:36 AM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry

Why did you choose health care,
Why did you choose me,
I may have wanted to kill myself,
Why did you think you could do it for me??

I dont understand,
You said you were helping me,
But really you tried snuffing me out.

A simple mistake,
You say it wasnt intentional,
Explain to me,
Why there was four times my dose.

I paid you good money,
Didnt make you work hard,
Trusted you with my life.

I wonder if you were really a nurse,
Doesnt matter now though,
You wont be allowed to practice,
After you tried taking my life.

Copyright © Kalika ... [ 2003-10-20 01:02:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Loving Nurse (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 04:16:57 AM AEST
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Wow!
There's so much neglect these days whether intentional or not.
I certainly hope she doesn't practice medicene again.
peace, joy, luv,
emy
Good work! I'm happy u made it!

Re: My Loving Nurse (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 09:07:44 AM AEST
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Nice to know you made it ok, alive and kicking.Keep on fighting, sometimes the world makes us have to keep fighting just to stay a part of it

Re: My Loving Nurse (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 04:44:36 PM AEST
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I was a CNA for some time
and it is so sad there are people
like your loving nurse
glad you made it

putter

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