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Left behind to bleed alone
Can’t keep the energy inside
Barely have enough to get thru the day
Only to pretend everything is okay
Nothing to spare for something new
No one wants to see thru this façade
Afraid of what they will find

The days keep passing by
Nothing much really happens
They all look the same
Slowly time fades away
Blending all days into one
Can’t find the strength to make it stop
To seize even a single moment
Unable to take hold of fate

Caught in this web of apathy
Not dealing with what’s wrong
Can’t dig deep enough to try
There’s no force to spend on self
The wounded soul will not heal
Not while living this lie
This can’t go on forever
Growing weaker with each phony smile [comments] => 3 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 32 [informant] => pl_rage [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Downfall

Contributed by pl_rage on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 01:53:12 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Injured by an invisible foe
Left behind to bleed alone
Can’t keep the energy inside
Barely have enough to get thru the day
Only to pretend everything is okay
Nothing to spare for something new
No one wants to see thru this façade
Afraid of what they will find

The days keep passing by
Nothing much really happens
They all look the same
Slowly time fades away
Blending all days into one
Can’t find the strength to make it stop
To seize even a single moment
Unable to take hold of fate

Caught in this web of apathy
Not dealing with what’s wrong
Can’t dig deep enough to try
There’s no force to spend on self
The wounded soul will not heal
Not while living this lie
This can’t go on forever
Growing weaker with each phony smile

Copyright Â© pl_rage ... [ 2003-10-20 13:53:12]
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Re: Downfall (User Rating: 1 )
by maryetta on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 03:07:41 PM AEST
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this is very deep and very good and i do know where your comming from i could feel this with evey fiber i have, dont stop writing

maryetta

Re: Downfall (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:47:55 AM AEST
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Good write, Peter...
Jenni

Re: Downfall (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:54:30 AM AEST
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This really hit home with me. Great write.

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