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Array ( [sid] => 25447 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Great God [time] => 2003-10-21 01:15:22 [hometext] => this one makes me sound like a nut, but its really just me getting some frustration out. [bodytext] => I loved her god,
Why did you do this to me?
If you are really a savior of those who believe,
Why do you tear out my heart?
And let her leave,
Maybe you had better plans,
But look at me now,
I can’t find your better plans,
And I wouldn’t know how,
I just want her back in my arms to hold,
I want to show her how much I still love her,
And together we could grow old,
In mysterious ways you work,
Taking my sweetheart away,
Did you plan this for me?
To feel this pain everyday,
If this is how this world is,
I’d rather not stay,
But if this is punishment,
Why do I still have to pay.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Paul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Great God

Contributed by Paul on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 01:15:22 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I loved her god,
Why did you do this to me?
If you are really a savior of those who believe,
Why do you tear out my heart?
And let her leave,
Maybe you had better plans,
But look at me now,
I can’t find your better plans,
And I wouldn’t know how,
I just want her back in my arms to hold,
I want to show her how much I still love her,
And together we could grow old,
In mysterious ways you work,
Taking my sweetheart away,
Did you plan this for me?
To feel this pain everyday,
If this is how this world is,
I’d rather not stay,
But if this is punishment,
Why do I still have to pay.

Copyright Â© Paul ... [ 2003-10-21 01:15:22]
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Re: Great God (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 03:01:04 AM AEST
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No..does not sound like a nut...shows the tender feeling of your heart..its fine. venkat

Re: Great God (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 07:35:37 AM AEST
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Stick with her Great God and you'll spend eternity with Him and her. If you need help in troubled times check out Psalm 69 "Save me, O God! For the waters have come up to my neck. I sink in deep mire, where there is no standing; I have come into deep waters, where the floods overflow me. I am weary with my crying; my throat is dry; my eyes fail". David was going through the same thing as you are. But David also wrote- "I will sing of the mercy of the Lord forever; with my mouth will I make know your faithfulness to ALL generations." God helped David through his troubles, and He can help you with yours =)
Just remember, that in the end, "God will wipe every tears from our eyes" Revelation 21:4, and we will live forever (with our lost loved ones) in paradise =)

Stay strong in times of trouble.
Love,
Jellybellyprincess

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