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Array ( [sid] => 25504 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hidden Tears [time] => 2003-10-21 19:10:47 [hometext] => I guess I just hate it when people make fun of people when they dont even know them. I should be used to it by now. I get it every day. [bodytext] => Hidden tears
come unbidden
yet go unchecked,
now freely given.

I cant go on;
cant continue.
this charade
now in full view.

The pain I feel
Deep inside.
I cant contain it.
I cant hide.

For over time,
Little is much.
The rage within
Insists to vent.

Yet I keep on.
Doing the same
Refusing to vent
Never laying the blame.

Thus it goes.
Ever building.
Always pushing.
Never stopping.

I wont explode
They dont deserve it.
For if I let go,
There will be not mercy.

Not even the worst of all of them would escape.
For my rage,
Thought its rightous,
Is terrible at its best.

So I surpress it.
Keep it within.
Only releasing in private
Only then. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Elf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Hidden Tears

Contributed by Elf on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 07:10:47 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Hidden tears
come unbidden
yet go unchecked,
now freely given.

I cant go on;
cant continue.
this charade
now in full view.

The pain I feel
Deep inside.
I cant contain it.
I cant hide.

For over time,
Little is much.
The rage within
Insists to vent.

Yet I keep on.
Doing the same
Refusing to vent
Never laying the blame.

Thus it goes.
Ever building.
Always pushing.
Never stopping.

I wont explode
They dont deserve it.
For if I let go,
There will be not mercy.

Not even the worst of all of them would escape.
For my rage,
Thought its rightous,
Is terrible at its best.

So I surpress it.
Keep it within.
Only releasing in private
Only then.

Copyright © Elf ... [ 2003-10-21 19:10:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hidden Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by POOBEAR on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 07:43:38 PM AEST
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Hi,
I am so sorry you must face this every
day. I can remember being ignored
completely and no one knowing my name.
You handle it with so much maturity.People
can be so cruel but please do not
let them get the better of you.You might
ask them what the hell makes you so much
better than me?
Don't ever give up and if you ever need someone to talk to I am here.

Your Pal
Poobear

Re: Hidden Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 07:56:50 PM AEST
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i know that feeling... hope for you to be strong! hug a moose, but no, if ya wanna have a chit chat or anything, just give me a ring!

aim: dream1ngma1den
aol: nmw5
email: nmw5@aol.com
or just PM me here, hehe.

Re: Hidden Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Rain on Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 12:15:12 AM AEST
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living in the shadows seems sometimes the best way to go about things as long as noone knows your there noone can hurt you but it is lonely and not for everyone. however even if you dont live in the shadows and people know you and make fun of you there will still come the day when no longer will they play with your emotions and you will be free from the pain so keep faith and be stronge

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