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Array ( [sid] => 25509 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It's Not ok [time] => 2003-10-21 21:30:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It's not ok...
no matter how much I tell myself it is
no matter what I tell myself and others

It hurts
that I'm not with you...
that your with her
It hurts

I'm a better person
with you
inside and out...
I tell myself

I can't stop
thinking about him with her
thinking about him not with me
I cant stop

I don't need him
but Oh, I do
I can't get over him...
I don't need him... I think

I try to say...
he's not worthy of me
he's not that special....
I'm lying to myself...

It's a lie... I know it
he doesn't like me,
he likes her
he's perfect for me...
...he just doesn't know it yet

I can't give up
thats my motivation
Live goes on
theres more out there
I can't give up
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Serendippitty [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

It's Not ok

Contributed by Serendippitty on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 09:30:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It's not ok...
no matter how much I tell myself it is
no matter what I tell myself and others

It hurts
that I'm not with you...
that your with her
It hurts

I'm a better person
with you
inside and out...
I tell myself

I can't stop
thinking about him with her
thinking about him not with me
I cant stop

I don't need him
but Oh, I do
I can't get over him...
I don't need him... I think

I try to say...
he's not worthy of me
he's not that special....
I'm lying to myself...

It's a lie... I know it
he doesn't like me,
he likes her
he's perfect for me...
...he just doesn't know it yet

I can't give up
thats my motivation
Live goes on
theres more out there
I can't give up

Copyright © Serendippitty ... [ 2003-10-21 21:30:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: It's Not ok (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 02:56:09 AM AEST
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Hang tuff!
I can relate as I've had these thoughts and fellings before.
peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: It's Not ok (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 08:18:22 AM AEST
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Don't give up that's the way to go! I can see hope in your painful words. All the best.

Emma.

Re: It's Not ok (User Rating: 1 )
by michelled43 on Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 06:40:45 PM AEST
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tears well up in my eyes when I read this.....I am feeling that way right now.....I wish he loved me like I love him! Great poem.......

always
chelle

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