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Array ( [sid] => 25839 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => without you [time] => 2003-10-27 00:28:12 [hometext] => how i feel being so far away from the one i love [bodytext] => Without you

On this stone cold floor i'm lying,
Trapped within my own sorry, crying.
Tears stained on the floor,
Waiting to see you at the door.

Scared and alone, I don’t know what to do.
I don’t think I can survive without you.
You keep me breathing, you keep me moving,
The way you talk to me is soothing.

My head is screaming, I'm turning around and around.
I feel like i’m falling, down and down.
No one to turn to, I don’t see you.
What do I do? What do I do?

I just can’t take this,
Still framed unhappiness.
My heads turning around and around.
I feel like I’m falling down and down.

They can’t see anything wrong,
I was hiding all along.
There are marks on my body,
I’m just not ready.

On this stone cold floor i’m lying,
Trapped within my sorry i’m crying.
I’m tired of trying
I feel like i’m dying

Without you,
Without you,
I don’t know what to do,
Without you

What will I ever do?
When I have everything but you?
I don’t know what to do,
When I am without you.
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without you

Contributed by frozensuicide on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 12:28:12 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Without you

On this stone cold floor i'm lying,
Trapped within my own sorry, crying.
Tears stained on the floor,
Waiting to see you at the door.

Scared and alone, I don’t know what to do.
I don’t think I can survive without you.
You keep me breathing, you keep me moving,
The way you talk to me is soothing.

My head is screaming, I'm turning around and around.
I feel like i’m falling, down and down.
No one to turn to, I don’t see you.
What do I do? What do I do?

I just can’t take this,
Still framed unhappiness.
My heads turning around and around.
I feel like I’m falling down and down.

They can’t see anything wrong,
I was hiding all along.
There are marks on my body,
I’m just not ready.

On this stone cold floor i’m lying,
Trapped within my sorry i’m crying.
I’m tired of trying
I feel like i’m dying

Without you,
Without you,
I don’t know what to do,
Without you

What will I ever do?
When I have everything but you?
I don’t know what to do,
When I am without you.




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Re: without you (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 01:46:50 PM AEST
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I know that feeling. Great write. Just hang in there.

~ Moonlit


Re: without you (User Rating: 1 )
by Rage on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 01:59:51 PM AEST
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I know that feeling as well. But you just gotta keep hoping and work hard in rewards to see that person again.

Happier Dayz,
~*~RAGE~*~


Re: without you (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 03:38:59 PM AEST
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Emotions so intense...great write!
Saira


Re: without you (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 11:40:09 PM AEST
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wow great poem u pulled me into the poem and made me feel as if I was actually. Very deep, gripping, and emotional. Good stuff.

Bobo (joel)




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