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Array ( [sid] => 25876 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Killing Me [time] => 2003-10-27 17:24:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => There's water falling from the clouds today,
and it's running down my window.
It's turning it dark and gloomy outside,
and it's just making my depression worse.
So I ask God to please make it stop,
before I slit my wrists,
but I guess he didn't answer my pray today,
the rain just kept falling.
So I walk to the bathroom, and close the door.
I open a bottle of pills, and take them all.
I slit my wrists too, to make my death alittle faster, and a few minutes later I'm dead.
but I guess God did answer my pray.
It was only a dream, I must have fallen asleep. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 32 [informant] => sugar0986 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Killing Me

Contributed by sugar0986 on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 05:24:49 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

There's water falling from the clouds today,
and it's running down my window.
It's turning it dark and gloomy outside,
and it's just making my depression worse.
So I ask God to please make it stop,
before I slit my wrists,
but I guess he didn't answer my pray today,
the rain just kept falling.
So I walk to the bathroom, and close the door.
I open a bottle of pills, and take them all.
I slit my wrists too, to make my death alittle faster, and a few minutes later I'm dead.
but I guess God did answer my pray.
It was only a dream, I must have fallen asleep.

Copyright © sugar0986 ... [ 2003-10-27 17:24:49]
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Re: Killing Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 05:53:38 PM AEST
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good write, a touch dark, first time I have read your work. thank you for stopping by. i`ll be back! Crow

Re: Killing Me (User Rating: 1 )
by TundraHydra on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 06:33:08 PM AEST
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gave me a chill there that I didn't expect since I'm suicidal right now. Keep up the writing

Re: Killing Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 08:28:36 PM AEST
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Brittany it better not be true i'll be so mad at you

Re: Killing Me (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 06:46:52 PM AEST
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I must say I enjoyed this and can relate to this quite a bit. However... it ended to abruptly try to focus more on the pain and capture that aspect which can be hard to do I admit. Once again a good poem loved the 1st 4 lines especially.

Bobo (Joel)

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