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Array ( [sid] => 25919 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The End [time] => 2003-10-27 23:31:58 [hometext] => *Dealing with the same subject matter as the previous. I got the 1st line at school and it went from there* [bodytext] => This is the end of the last time
Hanging off this perilous cliff
Bowed, defeated, and disgraced
Nothing can ease this torment
Which eats me like a virus
And cuts at me like a double edged sword

This is the end of the last time
I lick my blood-flecked lips
As I kiss my arm, blood-spattered floor
I'm chained to these walls
Screaming a hollow cry
Tormented, mutilated, and swollen

This is the end of the last time
Fingers raking the walls til
Their ground to the bone
Choking out empty, soundless sobs
I am the epitomy of failure
Chained to this wall

This is the end of the last time
I spit in my own eye
I beg for the pain
Which is rationed to me every night
It excites me in some twisted way
Even though my veins may bulge

This is the end of the last time
Blood trickling from my mouth, agape
Cursing every nameless, faceless god
I can think of, to dead to care
I scream out I've failed
A nameless suicide in this sea of faces
This is the last time... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 32 [informant] => bobotheclown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
The End

Contributed by bobotheclown on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 11:31:58 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



This is the end of the last time
Hanging off this perilous cliff
Bowed, defeated, and disgraced
Nothing can ease this torment
Which eats me like a virus
And cuts at me like a double edged sword

This is the end of the last time
I lick my blood-flecked lips
As I kiss my arm, blood-spattered floor
I'm chained to these walls
Screaming a hollow cry
Tormented, mutilated, and swollen

This is the end of the last time
Fingers raking the walls til
Their ground to the bone
Choking out empty, soundless sobs
I am the epitomy of failure
Chained to this wall

This is the end of the last time
I spit in my own eye
I beg for the pain
Which is rationed to me every night
It excites me in some twisted way
Even though my veins may bulge

This is the end of the last time
Blood trickling from my mouth, agape
Cursing every nameless, faceless god
I can think of, to dead to care
I scream out I've failed
A nameless suicide in this sea of faces
This is the last time...




Copyright © bobotheclown ... [ 2003-10-27 23:31:58]
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Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 12:06:40 AM AEST
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Hey girl,
don't know if these r real or jus writing but u got me convinced!
Great writing and very convincing!
Luv,
emy


Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 10:14:40 PM AEST
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Bloody hell Joel this is amazing. I am going to say what you say to me whenever you comment on my poems - stand strong, and hold on. Life is worth living, maybe not yet, but it will get better. I promise.


Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 10:21:42 PM AEST
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Beautiful as always Joel~
Keep on writing and dont lose hope.

(( Chanti


Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 05:12:49 PM AEST
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keep going joel, and know you are NOT a failure! How could a failure possibly write such incredible poetry as you do??!
Great poem..
x_x_x


Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 08:29:00 PM AEST
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Joel, you are not a failure. I hope you keep your head held high kiddo. ************* hugs ************* *S* Cynthia
P.S.
Don't ever stop writing.




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