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the scars of each day.
Two hearts comparison
no easy find.

The penalties, rewards,
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Nothing picture perfect,
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Fool`s Words

Contributed by crow on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 12:12:38 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

That one to sit in secret with,
hands that cool
the scars of each day.
Two hearts comparison
no easy find.

The penalties, rewards,
love laughter and tears.
Nothing picture perfect,
or is it?.............
A fool`s words turn to dust......Crow

Copyright © crow ... [ 2003-10-28 00:12:38]
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Re: Fool`s Words (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 12:31:23 AM AEST
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In adverse circumstances... even intelligent also become fools in the hands of fate...for most of us life seems to be an imperfect picture... very thoughtful write.. venkat

Re: Fool`s Words (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 12:38:28 AM AEST
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Very good writing!
hey, I'd never try 2 b perfect as I am what I am.
Awesome, makes one think1
peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: Fool`s Words (User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticReign on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 01:04:39 AM AEST
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Crow, this is so fabulous... it's so heartfelt, and so beautiful. It hits me right at home, must be why I love this poem... it puts a big, tender smile on my face :D
~Nikki

Re: Fool`s Words (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 01:40:09 AM AEST
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The first stanza...wow!!!
I think these thoughts so often
Short write..yes but very wise.

Re: Fool`s Words (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 02:30:59 AM AEST
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'tis so true Crow...it's not always the swift that win the race, or the intelligent that win the prize, many times the things we think are true are nothing but lies because life is imperfect, and so is circumstances, and time. Circumstances and time catch up with all mindkind!
Good thinking poem...deeply thinking poem!
loving critters
ConSue

Re: Fool`s Words (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 05:24:11 AM AEST
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Powerful words, and yes, you are right with every line ... great write ... Jan

Re: Fool`s Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 05:38:04 AM AEST
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thought provoking...strong write
Shari

Re: Fool`s Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 03:46:31 PM AEST
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a short poem - but a beautiful one
nothing is what it seems in this life, so transient and in a breath we are gone. to find solace is a great gift

merry

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