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[aid] => mick
[title] => Betrayed by love
[time] => 2003-10-28 16:42:57
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[bodytext] => You were the one,
That would always be there,
Would hold me in your arms,
Just to show how you care.
Through all my stupid *****,
You still loved only me,
Until SHE came along,
And I was history.
You dumped me to ***** her,
I hope you had some fun,
She rubbed it in my face,
Said she stole my hun.
For some absurd reason,
You really though you were slick,
Thought you would play us both,
What a stupid d***.
I said it was over when you dumped me,
That I would sleep with you no more,
I won’t even kiss you,
Cuz you slept with that wh0re.
You apologized a thousand times,
And said you and her were done,
You won’t even call her,
Cuz I'm your only one.
Now I must decide,
If I should take you back,
So I'm asking all of ypdc,
Please leave some feedback.
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[counter] => 225
[topic] => 22
[informant] => hardcoreputa
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[topicname] => LostLove
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Betrayed by love
Contributed by
hardcoreputa
on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 04:42:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You were the one,
That would always be there,
Would hold me in your arms,
Just to show how you care.
Through all my stupid *****,
You still loved only me,
Until SHE came along,
And I was history.
You dumped me to ***** her,
I hope you had some fun,
She rubbed it in my face,
Said she stole my hun.
For some absurd reason,
You really though you were slick,
Thought you would play us both,
What a stupid d***.
I said it was over when you dumped me,
That I would sleep with you no more,
I won’t even kiss you,
Cuz you slept with that wh0re.
You apologized a thousand times,
And said you and her were done,
You won’t even call her,
Cuz I'm your only one.
Now I must decide,
If I should take you back,
So I'm asking all of ypdc,
Please leave some feedback.
Copyright ©
hardcoreputa
... [
2003-10-28 16:42:57]
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Re: Betrayed by love
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 04:49:47 PM AEST
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---How many times should you forgive? 7? 7 times infinity.
Forgiveness rules- nothing's better than forgiveness in my mind.
Sure, you should give him a try, but as a friend, not anything else. That's just what I would do. of course I'm not you, so I don't know what YOU'd do....... But you should forgive and forget I think. It's all for the best =)
As for the writing aspect of this poem, twas good, but a little too much of the !*#!%*! if you know what I mean =)
Otherwise it was a nice work of art.
Best wishes with your whole situation.
I hope everything settles itself.....
Love Joy and Peace,
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Re: Betrayed by love
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 04:52:50 PM AEST
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Oh boy... I dunno. It seems like you're really hurt by him, and if he went and did that once, who's to say he won't do it again? On the other hand, there's always forgiveness. If he really truly cares about you, he'll change his ways and be devoted to you. But I don't know you or him and I don't know the level of feelings you have for him. If you really love him and want to be with him, go for it, as long as you can bring yourself to trust him again. If there's no trust, there's no point. I just very recently went through a very similar situation, and I'm still with my boyfriend, but like I said, I don't know your situation. You also have to think about whether or not you'll be able to look past the fact that he slept with someone else. If it bothers you too much to bring yourself to be intimate with him again, that'll be a problem too. You have a lot to think about, and the only advice I can really give you is don't make a rash decision, sit down with him and make it very clear the things you'll need from him if you do take him back, and go from there. If you think he really will be loyal, and you want to be with him, go for it. If not, move on. Good luck with this, I hope you let me know what happens! PM me anytime, if you need more help, I'll gladly do what I can. Best wishes,
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Betrayed by love
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 04:55:42 PM AEST
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| As someone who has been through this and went back I have this advice. Don't be a fool. Find strength on your own and with someone else. You will never be able to forget what he has done. Not in a million years. It will always be in the back of your mind. Just don't take it out on the next person that you find. |
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Re: Betrayed by love
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 06:38:04 PM AEST
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My opinon??Dont go there.You must find the strength to move on to better things.Believe you are worth more,have faith that there is someone out there who wouldn't do this to you,not even once.
Girl you have untapped talent and I'd love to see it used.All this censoring of words..not so pretty and if he makes you feel this way,write like this ,then I say to him "dont let the door hit your lily white on the way out"
I wish you the best and hope you make the right decision,the right one for you,not him
This is well written but I agree that the $%#@# takes away from what you truly have to offer . *smiles*
(((hugs))) too..I reckon you could do with one right now :) |
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Re: Betrayed by love
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by Cancer on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 12:32:16 AM AEST
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i'm not sure what advice to give. i was in his shoes once, and my wife was decent enough to take me back. i didn't technically sleep around, but i might as well have. but, i've also been on the receiving end of that sort of thing, and i know the pain and humiliation are almost unbearable.
i think you should really consider how much you care for him, and examine the reasons he means so much to you. then, decide if those aspects are really worth the risk of being hurt again.
just my opinion.
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Re: Betrayed by love
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by michelled43 on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 06:10:13 AM AEST
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| going back to someone that hurt you is one of the hardest decisions to make.....your heart is telling you to go back but something deep is telling you not to.....it is like your body and mind are being pulled two ways.....follow your heart and love like you have never been hurt before........that is the best advice i have ever gotten.....yes there have been many heartbreaks but each heartbreak brings out something in me and they each help me become a better person......good luck |
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Re: Betrayed by love
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by hardcoreputa on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 02:37:38 PM AEST
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| update, we had a long talk, and i took him back, i still even talk to the girl, but no longer let her meet my friends (she tried to ***** 8 of 9 she met...) we're doing well now and the girl he cheated with even goes to his ork and flirts and he always tells her off... in a nice way.... so thanx for all your input.... ~Apryl(hardcoreputa) |
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