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Array ( [sid] => 26127 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => CLOUDS LIKE OUR LIFE [time] => 2003-10-31 03:18:41 [hometext] => A Farewell to our dear Ilhar(Shari)....until we meet again....Come back soon! [bodytext] => Clouds like our life, dear Shari
Start with a blazing sunrise and immense energy!
During the day as they float through the sky,
They lose their colors, just like you and I.
They must continue to gather,
in good weather or bad.....
They have to be ready for the
sunset to make us all glad!

Sometimes they encounter problems
as they skit, traveling horizontally.
They lose their energy in storms,
from the winds, sometimes hail too!
But they recharge their hues,
and continue to ready themselves,
for that beautiful sunset,
so restful, so calm, so tranquil,
for us to view!

Words could never say it for me...
I'm at a loss to find the right ones!
You were the beautiful sunset,
with all it's magnificent colors,
painted across our skies.
You were the splendid sunrise,
as we read your poetry, that met our eyes!
But like clouds that must renew,
and, find the energy to repaint their hue...
Please take much loving care of you.
We'll not only miss your sunsets, and sunrises,
but, Oh My, How We Will Miss You!

Created especially
for a very dear lady
who I'm so proud
to call my friend.
Cheri Cam LeBren
October 31, 2003
I love you,
ConSue

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CLOUDS LIKE OUR LIFE

Contributed by lovingcritters on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 03:18:41 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



Clouds like our life, dear Shari
Start with a blazing sunrise and immense energy!
During the day as they float through the sky,
They lose their colors, just like you and I.
They must continue to gather,
in good weather or bad.....
They have to be ready for the
sunset to make us all glad!

Sometimes they encounter problems
as they skit, traveling horizontally.
They lose their energy in storms,
from the winds, sometimes hail too!
But they recharge their hues,
and continue to ready themselves,
for that beautiful sunset,
so restful, so calm, so tranquil,
for us to view!

Words could never say it for me...
I'm at a loss to find the right ones!
You were the beautiful sunset,
with all it's magnificent colors,
painted across our skies.
You were the splendid sunrise,
as we read your poetry, that met our eyes!
But like clouds that must renew,
and, find the energy to repaint their hue...
Please take much loving care of you.
We'll not only miss your sunsets, and sunrises,
but, Oh My, How We Will Miss You!

Created especially
for a very dear lady
who I'm so proud
to call my friend.
Cheri Cam LeBren
October 31, 2003
I love you,
ConSue





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Re: CLOUDS LIKE OUR LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 03:39:13 AM AEST
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you are such a splendid writer.....so creative and heartfelt.....she knows.....she'll take care.....


Re: CLOUDS LIKE OUR LIFE (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 03:55:42 AM AEST
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This is how a dedicated poem should be written..but let your friend continue to write..


Re: CLOUDS LIKE OUR LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 06:08:53 AM AEST
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Very sunny, heavenly write!
Very well said!
peace, joy, luv,
emy


Re: CLOUDS LIKE OUR LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 09:48:31 AM AEST
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Consue thank you so much....rest assured I will be back hopefully soon because I don't know how long I can stay away from my friends.
Hugs
Shari


Re: CLOUDS LIKE OUR LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 09:53:44 AM AEST
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great poem for a dear friend.
michelle


Re: CLOUDS LIKE OUR LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 10:48:10 AM AEST
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You always make me just wanna teddy hug ya..lol.You are a beautiful selfless woman..and I think you have painted Shari's essence here just perfectly..




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