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Array ( [sid] => 26389 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All I Ask... [time] => 2003-11-03 22:47:58 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Before you,on my knees...
I offer up myself,all I am inside
Beneath moon,before sunsets
By dawns grace,or in summer showers...
I will walk beside you always
Your heart will know my smile
Your tears will feel my kiss
In your time of need
There will be comfort
I am yours...freely
Without restraint,or inhibition
If you walk,so shall I
Should you fall,I will be strong
Take me as I stand today before you...
Let me be myself,and of your soul
Allow mine to touch yours
All I ask,as I look up into your eyes
Is...
hold my heart for an eternity,
walk with me through time

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All I Ask...

Contributed by lovingwhispers on Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 10:47:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Before you,on my knees...
I offer up myself,all I am inside
Beneath moon,before sunsets
By dawns grace,or in summer showers...
I will walk beside you always
Your heart will know my smile
Your tears will feel my kiss
In your time of need
There will be comfort
I am yours...freely
Without restraint,or inhibition
If you walk,so shall I
Should you fall,I will be strong
Take me as I stand today before you...
Let me be myself,and of your soul
Allow mine to touch yours
All I ask,as I look up into your eyes
Is...
hold my heart for an eternity,
walk with me through time

Copyright © lovingwhispers ... [ 2003-11-03 22:47:58]
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Re: All I Ask... (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 11:17:07 PM AEST
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Such love and devotion....your words always move me to the core. Increadibly beautiful .

Roses

Re: All I Ask... (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 11:26:12 PM AEST
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And LovingWhispers, I believe your poetry. You really do live your words...you are a fine lady, with much class...which means of course good manners, and very kind to others. May that day come for you...the day when your love will be complete, and you will meet, the one that you truly can give your heart to!
Beautiful heartfelt poem, Sharon.
LOve you,
ConSue

Re: All I Ask... (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 12:53:48 AM AEST
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Beautiful write ... always so tender, graceful and full of love ... Jan

Re: All I Ask... (User Rating: 1 )
by kalika_vidya on Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 12:54:57 AM AEST
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I like this poem..in the same tone I have written a poem " I am an Indian woman"
..this is beautiful.. K

Re: All I Ask... (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 03:39:38 AM AEST
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What a superb poem " your tears will feel my kisses.... hold my heart to eternity walk with me through time.." this is a timeless piece.. a rare soul can write like this.. none can imitate you dear friend..well I am in a hurry...just to read my daughter kalika's poems occassionally I am stopping..thank you..venkat

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