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Thinking of my lost friends
Life never would last
I see the ghosts of the past
The memories gone fast
I walk the streams
And sit in the forest
As I recall the time
Time I was happy
Time that I was younger
I lay in the soft grass
Seeing the clouds float pass
I only see familiar but far away faces
They are gone now, to other certain places
I was a hero back then
I was someone looked up to
Now, I am just a lonely soul
Not sure of what to do
I miss the past so much
As well as my love's soft touch
I am not happy anymore
My mind remembers, but is so sore
No one even knows who I am now
Nor do I know them
Oh how I wish for that past to be with me
Just once for the ones I knew to see
That I am still here missing me... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 44 [informant] => Death_Fire530 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Nostalgic )

I Miss Me

Contributed by Death_Fire530 on Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 09:53:13 PM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic

I think back the years into the past
Thinking of my lost friends
Life never would last
I see the ghosts of the past
The memories gone fast
I walk the streams
And sit in the forest
As I recall the time
Time I was happy
Time that I was younger
I lay in the soft grass
Seeing the clouds float pass
I only see familiar but far away faces
They are gone now, to other certain places
I was a hero back then
I was someone looked up to
Now, I am just a lonely soul
Not sure of what to do
I miss the past so much
As well as my love's soft touch
I am not happy anymore
My mind remembers, but is so sore
No one even knows who I am now
Nor do I know them
Oh how I wish for that past to be with me
Just once for the ones I knew to see
That I am still here missing me...

Copyright © Death_Fire530 ... [ 2003-11-04 21:53:13]
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Re: I Miss Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 10:24:52 PM AEST
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Lovely write....sometimes, I too, miss the past..
Jenni

Re: I Miss Me (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 10:51:31 PM AEST
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All changes come about for a reason.Keep walking by those streams,through the forest,even if they are only strolls through your mind.For you will come upon a happiness,and out of the blue something great will show itself.Remember,positive attracts positive *smiles* Very personal and sad write.

Just wanted to add that I too used to miss me..I spent a lot of time soul searching and found the me still inside..it was just buried a lil.I hope your road is smooth
Sharon

Re: I Miss Me (User Rating: 1 )
by zeppchic420 on Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 07:05:02 PM AEST
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you put your emotions so well into writing
i feel the same way

Re: I Miss Me (User Rating: 1 )
by sindi-selde on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 10:12:46 PM AEST
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Wow. That is *good*!!!!

I love this. Brillaint darling!

At last, someone who knows how I feel.

Re: I Miss Me (User Rating: 1 )
by talisman on Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 02:32:15 PM AEST
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I too have left behind so much
I know what it is to want what was
to remember good times with freinds and to want them back so badly
good poem

p.s. keep the faith man! you are still a hero, i will remember!

Re: I Miss Me (User Rating: 1 )
by jme on Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 09:15:51 AM AEST
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With emotions put in words like that, no need to miss the past. You have a future to look forward to.

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