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Array ( [sid] => 26491 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => SHE'S ONLY 16? [time] => 2003-11-05 01:53:00 [hometext] => This is for one of my poetry, chat friend. [bodytext] => Heavenly Father,
Bowing humbly before your throne
My heart cries for this
luvly girl.
Never knows if tommorrow will be
no home..
Such a luvly mother she has.

Walking streets, searching
a job.
Hurting for her children
trying 2 b strong in her
terror.
Help them sweet,
precious, luving God!
Show um how quickly
u move!

Her daughter's devastated
'cause Mom is!
She's only one child
in her family!
Lord, my God,she's
only 16!
Worries not for herself,
it's plain.

Now Father God so
tender-n-strong
increase her faith
fifty times ten!
Show them your luv
sustaining, all along!
Fill their store house
abundantly sweet,
God!

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 19 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

SHE'S ONLY 16?

Contributed by emystar on Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 01:53:00 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Heavenly Father,
Bowing humbly before your throne
My heart cries for this
luvly girl.
Never knows if tommorrow will be
no home..
Such a luvly mother she has.

Walking streets, searching
a job.
Hurting for her children
trying 2 b strong in her
terror.
Help them sweet,
precious, luving God!
Show um how quickly
u move!

Her daughter's devastated
'cause Mom is!
She's only one child
in her family!
Lord, my God,she's
only 16!
Worries not for herself,
it's plain.

Now Father God so
tender-n-strong
increase her faith
fifty times ten!
Show them your luv
sustaining, all along!
Fill their store house
abundantly sweet,
God!

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2003-11-05 01:53:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: SHE'S ONLY 16? (User Rating: 1 )
by kalika_vidya on Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 05:15:41 AM AEST
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your poems about helpless children moves me a lot..K

Re: SHE'S ONLY 16? (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 01:19:23 PM AEST
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that was a beautiful poem.. it sounds like a prayer. prayers you make up are always so wonderful.... great job keep posting

Love, peace and Joy
JENNI E

Re: SHE'S ONLY 16? (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 01:37:06 AM AEST
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increase her faith fifty times!..thats good.. blessings emy.. venkat

Re: SHE'S ONLY 16? (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 01:41:18 AM AEST
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EmyStar this is sad and good hope not to be true

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