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Array ( [sid] => 26737 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => take it all back [time] => 2003-11-08 16:32:55 [hometext] => i wrote this about a false guy and was basically telling him what the poem says [bodytext] => Take your smile back
it only decieves my eyes

Turn your starry eyes away from me they don't
shine with love for me

Don't give me those tender kisses
they are not sincere

take this tangled soul back
it is still a part of you

Take your empty cold heart
the shards of ice pierce my heart with pain

Take back all your empty promises
I don't wan them

Stop telling me you care
when you know deep down you could
care less

JEnna

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take it all back

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 04:32:55 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Take your smile back
it only decieves my eyes

Turn your starry eyes away from me they don't
shine with love for me

Don't give me those tender kisses
they are not sincere

take this tangled soul back
it is still a part of you

Take your empty cold heart
the shards of ice pierce my heart with pain

Take back all your empty promises
I don't wan them

Stop telling me you care
when you know deep down you could
care less

JEnna

Copyright © PhantomVampyress ... [ 2003-11-08 16:32:55]
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Re: take it all back (User Rating: 1 )
by BrghtNSnshny on Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 07:47:08 PM AEST
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It really is sad how many guys are really like that, but just as many girls are like that too. It hurts to be used, but don't let it hold you back from recieving the love from another that you deserve.

Nicely expressed

Nikki

Re: take it all back (User Rating: 1 )
by stargazer on Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 11:19:24 PM AEST
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The worst feeling in the world is being denied false love... and actually believing them. This poem was amazing... I look forward to more.

Amy

Re: take it all back (User Rating: 1 )
by Destiny on Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 11:25:16 PM AEST
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Awesome poem, alot of emotion.
~Des

Re: take it all back (User Rating: 1 )
by michelled43 on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 11:08:57 PM AEST
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you express yourself well.....i am going through the same thing right now but i cant get him out of my head......keep strong and keep loving like you have never had a broken heart

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