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Is it wrong if i hold on.
Is it wrong if i ask how long.
Is it wrong if i say so long.
Is it wrong that my love is you.
Is it wrong that it feels so true.
Is it wrong what we are going through.
Is it wrong that its you ui miss.
Is it wrong that i miss your kiss.
Is it wrong that we feel like this.
Is it wrong that i love you so much.
Is it wrong that i need your touch.
Is it wrong that we are apart as such.
Is it wrong that i love you my friend.
Is it wrong for all the rules we bend.
Is it wrong that its my love i send.
Is it wrong to ask whats on your mind.
Is it wrong to know your love i find.
Is it wrong to want to treat you kind.
Is it wrong to want to do you right.
Is it wrong for me to stand up and fight.
Is it wrong to wish you never out of sight.
Is it wrong i want you stopping the cold.
Is it wrong that i want you to hold.
Is it wrong that i want to be wth you and grow old......

No regrets, no change, just missin ya....
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IS IT WRONG

Contributed by 13hopes on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 10:46:42 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Is it wrong if i give up.
Is it wrong if i hold on.
Is it wrong if i ask how long.
Is it wrong if i say so long.
Is it wrong that my love is you.
Is it wrong that it feels so true.
Is it wrong what we are going through.
Is it wrong that its you ui miss.
Is it wrong that i miss your kiss.
Is it wrong that we feel like this.
Is it wrong that i love you so much.
Is it wrong that i need your touch.
Is it wrong that we are apart as such.
Is it wrong that i love you my friend.
Is it wrong for all the rules we bend.
Is it wrong that its my love i send.
Is it wrong to ask whats on your mind.
Is it wrong to know your love i find.
Is it wrong to want to treat you kind.
Is it wrong to want to do you right.
Is it wrong for me to stand up and fight.
Is it wrong to wish you never out of sight.
Is it wrong i want you stopping the cold.
Is it wrong that i want you to hold.
Is it wrong that i want to be wth you and grow old......

No regrets, no change, just missin ya....
: ) X Many that i havent told you about!!!! And : ) for just now.........

Copyright © 13hopes ... [ 2003-11-09 10:46:42]
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Re: IS IT WRONG (User Rating: 1 )
by maria_mendonez_ibardolas on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 10:55:59 AM AEST
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its not wrong to read this...... :)

Re: IS IT WRONG (User Rating: 1 )
by texasw97 on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 11:10:47 AM AEST
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No, it's not wrong to want what you treasure in your heart. nice work

Re: IS IT WRONG (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 11:35:45 AM AEST
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I really like this poem.. very well written good job

peac eand joy

JENNA

Re: IS IT WRONG (User Rating: 1 )
by BrghtNSnshny on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 09:22:47 PM AEST
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its never wrong..its all a mater of how express what you feel. Very well done, it is never ever or will ever be wrong.

Re: IS IT WRONG (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 01:17:25 PM AEST
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Very good work here!
It wakes up ones brain and gets um thinking.
peace, joy, luv,
emy

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