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Array ( [sid] => 26764 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => after all this time [time] => 2003-11-09 11:45:31 [hometext] => my writing speaks for itself [bodytext] => Ever since you left me
My life hasn’t been the same
It’s hard to let things be
All I can do is call out your name

The last time I held your hand
Was a time I want back
Being with you was my only plan
Now it’s hard for me to stay intact

The last time I was inside of you
Was a time my white sky turned blue
I knew that this was the end
That I was losing my best friend

The last time I saw you cry
I gave you that look like I didn’t know why
A blank expression came over my face
These memories I wish I could erase

The last time I saw your smile
Was a time I thought I was on top of the world
I said something that was worth your while
I believe I gave you a necklace made of diamonds and pearls

The last time you had a key
Was the only one that I had made
Now it’s buried in the deep blue sea
With all my other belongs that are not up for trade

The last time you crossed my mind
Was a dream I had that we were never apart
Because of you, I know true love is hard to find
I must admit that you still have a special place in my heart
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after all this time

Contributed by texasw97 on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 11:45:31 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Ever since you left me
My life hasn’t been the same
It’s hard to let things be
All I can do is call out your name

The last time I held your hand
Was a time I want back
Being with you was my only plan
Now it’s hard for me to stay intact

The last time I was inside of you
Was a time my white sky turned blue
I knew that this was the end
That I was losing my best friend

The last time I saw you cry
I gave you that look like I didn’t know why
A blank expression came over my face
These memories I wish I could erase

The last time I saw your smile
Was a time I thought I was on top of the world
I said something that was worth your while
I believe I gave you a necklace made of diamonds and pearls

The last time you had a key
Was the only one that I had made
Now it’s buried in the deep blue sea
With all my other belongs that are not up for trade

The last time you crossed my mind
Was a dream I had that we were never apart
Because of you, I know true love is hard to find
I must admit that you still have a special place in my heart




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Re: after all this time (User Rating: 1 )
by Total_Immortal on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 03:54:22 PM AEST
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I love the fact youve written a poem about heartache and regret...regret it such a strong feeling and is hard to describe, but i think youve done it really well. Made me think of stuff i regret =( but its al part of life i suppose!
A very enjoyable read thankyou!

sarah xxx


Re: after all this time (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 04:36:12 AM AEST
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Yes you're writing definately does speak for it's self...it is loud and clear. This was a great write that I can relate to in a way. It is so true about true love being hard to find. I hope you do find that true love and not regret anything about that one, take care always.

Emma.




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